Please keep on writing i really like this story keep up the good work

Poor Katara! Poor Zuko! This is good, please continue.

This is a brilliant piece of work!! I'm hooked!

Omg Omg i want to read more! Plz continue i love this story i want to see her meet the admirial cause i have an idea on what might happen!

good writting so far, good balance between plot and descriptions. hope to see more soon

This is truly poetic. Please continue writing it!
It is so rare to find someone who actually writes well, I would love to see this develope into a story... you've built a nice foundation.

Please update!!It seems really good!

this is really, really good. please post more soon :)

This is really sad, but dark at the same time and thats what makes me like it even more. I live for that, so i can't wait to see what happens next!^_~

*tear* That was soo sad!! And a little freaky in a way, because of the last sentence, "Too merciful." This story is so well written and amazing, the only problem with it is that it is updated so rarely! Please, please update chapters faster and update the next one soon!

This is depressing...
i can't to read more.

Oh-dark Zutara. Angst. Lovin it I am. Continue whenever you get the chance. I'm just now finding this little gem. I really like how (tho this may just be me) there is a feeling of detachment with this story, very fitting for its content, and I think it's a little ironic that Zuko is the one 'feeling' in this story, when Katara is usually assumed to be the emotional one.

Update soon!

THIS IS AMAZING! PLEASE UPDATE!

so good!
update soon!