Well, that was definitely an atypical ending. Usually, stories like this end with the sisters living happily ever after, or one of them dies or something terrible like that. This ending was much more realistic, I think. In fact, the whole story kinda was. Thank you for bringing a little realism to this sometimes overly fantastical site.

Hanabi's pov was well done and convincing. Hinata's reaction however felt a bit contrived (I realize you wanted the story to be short, but still). She went from overreacting and angry to the point of being massively out of character to suddenly accepting Hanabi as a legitimate lover within a few sentences...

Still though, good read. Of the best Hinata x Hanabi fics I've read so far. Almost makes me want to try my hand at the pairing.

Awesome story, bittersweet ending, but awesome nonetheless.

well first of all id like to say im adding this to my favorites one being because i am a mega-perv and two being because for this type of one shot it is ecspecially well written i appreciate you writing it,it has added a splash of color to my dull life.

Aww it was cute. I feel sorry for Hanabi at the end but the story was well done and cutd.

this story is very good. but i think they should have ended up together 4/5

hey i actuly liked the story i was just looking for hinata-chan and her sister and i found this and i whanted to say you ROCKED at it way to go!!
but also i kind of whanted the chibi picture of Hinata e-mail it to me at demon. please and one more time YOU ROCK!

Dude that was pretty good. I'd hate to sound like a perv but you should write another HinataxHanabi or HinaHana, or whatever you call it. Or maybe a sakuraxino...

You know... I can just picture Hinata convincing Naruto to bring Hanabi into sex :P

And I think maybe... Just maybe, Hinata decided it wasn't wrong a bit fast :))

OMG that was so weird XD
lolz...
well its was kinda good XD
the tingles XD hehe
nice...
good job hehe...

i have two things to say. 1. i really want that chibi hinata and 2. this is the best lolicon i read to date. i just want to add that lolicon isn't wrong don't be ashamed by writing it. just don't do something like that to a real underage girl.

Awesome!

eh its pretty good... i actually wrote a hinata-hanabi-naruto one... its pretty messed up but from the people who read it it was pretty good... btw when hanabi was doing it to herself i thought she was on the training grounds...

Yosh! I hate it when people disable non member review, it screws me over, seriously. Anywho, Awesome fic, it was really well done and easy enough to understand. By all means call me a pervert, but regardless you're a good writer. I hope it reaches 10 reviews. Sincerely your first time reader Hawkeye. Now I'm off to read The Slug Queen. ^_^

People write Hinata x Hinata? Hunh. I'm gonna have to go check that out... Anyway, this was so sweet. But I feel so sad for Hanabi. She couldn't end up with Hinata. But that's okay, I'll try to deal with it. But what I can't deal with is Hinata x Naruto. I'm sorry, but I really don't like that pairing. Oh well, my issues. But besides that, this is a sweet story. I really like it. I do.