 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-09-30 . chapter 1how cute ! U make a second chapter ! |
 missmcweir 2009-09-15 . chapter 1I love this story and the style! |
 VioletIsARockstar 2009-08-31 . chapter 1I said it before, and I'll say it again. I LOVE KAORUXRENGE! |
 Aideko 2009-01-25 . chapter 1You wrote this pairing very convincingly. Renge is usually portrayed in a rather over-the-top manner in most fics, but you managed to make her more real as a person while staying true to her character. Kaoru was also wonderful: his perceptive side is one the reasons why he's my favorite between the twins, and you captured that beautifully. I love how everything developed so naturally rather than being forced. The last line was perfect and so very Kaoru. Excellent writing! |
 AlleluiaElizabeth 2008-12-13 . chapter 1This was good. :) I like your writing style here with the section openers "And then this happened:".
And I am glad there is a Kaoru/Renge fic on this site.
It was well paced and well written. And the messing up on the kiss worked really well. :D |
 SylverEyes 2008-10-20 . chapter 1You may have, possibly, just converted me. :D Loved it. Detail, progression at a good pace, characterization... all of it. Must go read more of your stuff. What else is there that I can say? It's great! |
 CampionSayn 2008-02-16 . chapter 1SA!
This was beautiful and somewhat strange fic. Renge/Kaoru? Never thought thte pairing to even be in the bank, but you made it work and work well. That's all that counts. |
 pom-chan 2008-01-14 . chapter 1I loved the interaction between Renge and both the twins in this. :) Especially how much they repeated 'otaku' instead of using her name. It really fits in with their relationship in the manga/anime, a sort of teasing relationship. And her getting to be the mascot... Hehe. x)
It was light-hearted in the middle, but the beginning was vaguely sad. After all, how did Renge come to Kaoru's doorway in the rain, desperate for a job? From what's revealed later in the story, it was probably the revelation of Haruhi's real gender. Which puts them in the same boat, lingering on memories of Haruhi. And... everything in this story made them work, unlikely couple that they are. |
 blackrosevirus 2007-11-25 . chapter 1lol. Dude. I am so glad i am not the only person who likes this pairings :D |
 Generic Gen 2007-11-23 . chapter 1wow, that was wonderfully written. i never even considered kaoru/renge, but you just tied it all together so perfectly. |
 Harada Risa 2007-11-21 . chapter 1 Oh wow, I don't know what to say! o_o
When I first saw that it was between Kaoru/Renge I thought it was going to be some weird fanfiction but you proved me wrong! It's really cute and sweet! I really like it! ^_^ |
 Go To Durrcakes. 2007-11-18 . chapter 1Oh my oh my oh my oh my!
I love you.
So much.
You have no idea.
That was possibly the cutest thing I've ever read. And it wasn't rushed and it was just plain lovely. (Although, next time, I say that they make out. Just a suggestion.)
It was just pure win with this. I don't know, something about it just made me D'AW a bit inside, you know? It's like my good meltage, you know? That you make me do with every single one of your stories?
Anyway. It was sweet and perfect and my only complaint is that there are spacing issues. Before or after most italics, there's a space missing between words. I don't know-- let's blame FFN for that, or a deffective document. Who knows?
Whatever it was, though, this made me HAPPY. So. Write another one. (Where they all go skating. And Tamaki makes them do something MINIMUM WAGE STYLE, and Renge and Kaoru just decide WHY THE HELL NOT IN A FIT OF ANGSTY PASSION.)
Keep writing me my crack, woman. |