Iv waited till now to review this story but WOW! i love it! love love love it! =D keep on writting!

This. Is. Such. A. Good. Story. I love it! This is defiantly getting favorited.

Zemyx is awsome! But if Demyx got sick because he wasn't acting like Lust, then why did the other people who visited the cliff get sick?

hello there! I've read your stories, and I never had a chance to actually type what I wanted to say. I didn't have an account, so that's my fault... Anyway, I wanted to ask: Please make a sequel to this, pretty please? It's just amazing... To see what happens when they are re-created again. And, if you like.. I can come up with ideas.

I loved this story to death.

I've been reading this since the day started, and I only caught up with the most recent chapter now. Whew! I'm really in love with your writing. I read Heaven's Light just yesterday, and when I found out how intricate and unique your writing and plotlines turn out to be, I started with this. I was absolutely swept away. I'll be looking forward to updates and the sins' and virtues' own histories! Amazing job! :)

Woah! This is so creative.

I really love your fanfics. They are so amazing!

update soon

Continue!! It's really good!!

wow, you were RIGHT! This story is amazing! Even though they ended up dead in the end, it's an awesome twist that they start over and you get to see how their lives started! Are you gonna do an epilogue/intro for the virtues too?

Whoa... This story is amazing. Seriously. I'm sad that I wasn't here to see it all the way through, but I'm glad that I was able to see the epilogue and the story of the sins. This whole story is just purely amazing, the way the characters mixed and it just seemed so… complete. Perfect. This si going to be one of my favorite stories for such a long time.

You have NO idea how hard I cried my face off while reading this. It's a really good idea and it was executed perfectly! I couldn't imagine the story any differently.

I knew, just KNEW, but I was still hoping for a happy ending. Though, it IS happy in a way, I suppose. :D Thanks so much for brightening my insomnia-ridden nights!

Love, Tamouri

You are the coolest! How do you manage to write such flowing, emotion-rising (evocative?) stuff? Teach me! Please write about Zexy next!

Wow this story is brilliant! Can't wait for more of these how they became sin chapters, update soon!

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These origins are so cool! I loved learning about Riku and Demyx more I tink. I've always liked Demyx more so its due to bias and not how its written, which was great! I can see now where Demyx gets his childish behaviour that we all know and love and his birth was really great! So open, I don't think I've ever heard of something like that but it sounds fun for some reason. Xigbar really surprised me but I liked it all the same and the guys who took Dem were complete major arses. It doesn't matter if the guy is Lust personified, doesn't mean ou take advantage of the guy.