Aw! That was cute! xD NO! IT'S ENDED! *sobs* I really liked that story! GOOD JOB TRUTH! :D

WHAT! I'M GETTING MARRIED! :o AH! wow...Great chapter though! please update soon!

xD Omg! I loved it! Wait a minute...cedric..like cedric diggory? xD YAY! wow I loves the beach, and it was a good chapter! but...I have to ask..whats with 4 yrs. later? lol I know! I'm soo stupid for asking, but great chapter! as I said before! :D

pce out!

xD OMG! HAT WAS GOD! lol I loved it...lol Chris is funny! hope ya update soon! :D

YAY! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! xD Aww how nice, thanks for putting me in the story! YAY! and I loved the story, but not to be mean but you need to work on your grammar..that's just some constructive criticism! xD but other than that, THE STORY WAS AWESOME! have a great day!

pce out!

Hi!

I think this was a good idea for the story and I like that you're doing a sequel to the Doctor's proposal! I felt like the story was rushed and I wish that you took time to explain everything more and develop the plot. I think you should also seperate your sentences because it was more difficult to read the dialogue, so plz try and sort it out. I also think you should add in more description and detail, such as showing their feelings and explaining what they are going throuh at that moment.it will make your story better and it will be more fun to read! I hope you don't take this as a flame, I just wanted to help you improve so you can become a better writer, I know you have alot of talent! So I hope you can work on those and I really look forward to seeing what you do with your future stories! I hope you keep on writing and I hope that I helped you in some way! If you would like, I could beta-read it for you, I would be happy to fix it up and go over it for ya. OK, this was a cute story idea and I look forward to reading more stories from you, cya soon!

OMG! xD YAY! AWESOME STORY! lol! So how are you Truth? Do you like waffles? xD YAY FOR THE DOCTOR'S DAUGHTER!

Hi- I read your first story to so I'm going to try to help you out. Please dont get mad at me because I'm trying to help you. I agree w/ the other reviewer about the dialouge. It gets very confusing when it's run together. I think that you have good ideas and potential as a writer. I also think that you should work on descriptions and setting the scene. Not only does this help your story unfold but it also makes it not seemed hurried. It is better to spend a lot of time on a stroy describing things than to rush it. It maybe helpful if you ask for a BETA. If you want someone to lok at your stories before you post them you can ask a friend or PM someone. I could do it if you wanted- but it may take me some time to get back to you. I'll be more thanhappy to help if you want me to. Good luck.

OK, first off please don't take my review as a flame, because that's NOT my intent at all. I'm providing you with this feedback so that you may improve your stories and as improve as a writer, NOT to bash you or your story.

First thing I noticed about your story was that it felt very rushed. So much happened in such a sort period of time. Try and slow things down and develop the storys plot some more. Give us details about their lives and what they may be thinking and feeling at given times. This will give your readers a better understanding of the story your telling.

Second thing: Please use seperate lines for all spoken dialog. That way it is much easier to understand who said what.

Lastly, you need to watch your punctuation and grammar. You have run on sentances, and in many places you forgot to put a space between your sentences. Both these things make your story difficult to read, so work on improving them.

I hope my comments help you with future stories! Good luck and keep going, don't give up!