A great story. Very good.

I liked this very much. The last line was perfect.

I would have liked to have seen more of Carrisford in the novel as well. This is a very good try at filling in a gap that needs filling.

I quite like this! (In a sad way.) It would be lovely if you used this to start an ALP category in the Book section of the site, too.

Great story. It's always nice to read more about the Indian Gentleman. You kept it within the book-verse and captured the angst well. Keep writing!

Aw, poor Carrisford. I really liked this look into his mind, how he was so tortured, and that's why he didn't remember there was a girl at first. I feel sorry for him. :( Yay bee fic! Yay bee fic in a new fandom!