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sdbeth 2008-07-20 ch 21,	abuseThanks for finishing up. It was very nice at the end. Beth
ChristinaAngel 2008-07-19 ch 21,	abuseWow the fact that the killer was a woman was unexpected, but I liked how you did it from Judy's POV so you could see why the killer did and how Sara fit into all of this. Great story!
Chelles 2008-07-19 ch 21,	abuseWow! What an ending! I love the way you tied in Dr. Lurie and Sara's kidnapping. I never even thought of the possibility that he would have seen her in the hospital and what it could have done to him. But, the way you wrote it was great! The bizarre rationale Gina provided for killing all the Sara/Debbie look alikes in the world was, in a word, freaky. But, it's definitely something that CSI would bring us. :-) I have to say, I'm more than a little disturbed by the horrible things your mind comes up with. Faces in jars?! Eek! Do you secretly write horror movies? Of course, the ending scene was adorable. I feel bad for Michele, though. I know that Sara will be able to get her out of trouble. Could that be a sequel, perhaps? (Hint, hint) This has been a fantastic ride. I'm just sad to see it come to an end. You are more than welcome for any help that I gave...you know I'm always here for you. :-) Thank you for sharing this story with us!
sasquatch223 2008-07-16 ch 21,	abuseA fantastic end to a fantastic story. This chapter kept me on edge, and the revelation of the killer was quite a twist. I'm really glad to know the ending, but at the same time I don't want this fic to end. Absolutely brilliant, and I really look forward to your next fic, if there is going to be one.
aussieforgood 2008-07-16 ch 21,	abuseFinally!! And thank you, what are friends for I was glad to have been able to help you out in the tiniest of ways :D I loved the way this chapter started...and ended. Of course I was a little disappointed at the lack of details in the beginning but it was better than nothing so I'm not gonna complain :P Oh and I forgot to say that I was right about the killer :D I guessed a few chapters back that it was Bells secretary, but I didn't guess that she and the daughter in law was the same person. I would never have expected Judy to be the one to get kidnapped and the way she managed to get out of the situation she was in and get Gina to admit everything was a surprise. Good thing Gina never found out that Sara was back. So all this was because she had a thing for Lurie, and all this time, or should I say as soon as I guessed that it was her, I thought it was because she had a crush on Grissom. I love the way you ended it with Sara leaving again so soon, and no one even knew she was back, and Grissom just starting to get the cold he had in GDC :P I'm just glad you had her take care of him just a little bit before she left...and I would have thought you would have mentioned that magnet he had on the fridge again :P This was a great fic and now that its over I have to admit that I'm a little sad.
angry penguin 2008-07-15 ch 21,	abuseA very good ending. Poor Grissom. Sara just came home and now she' gone again.
Chelles 2008-06-12 ch 20,	abuseAh, yes, up to your usual tricks. You just love to leave me with more questions than answers, don't you? I love all the stuff with Greg at the nursing home. His assumption that Grissom had a fling with Gladys was hilarious! Hey, Greg, catch on: Grissom likes the younger girls! Hehe. And, I loved his interaction with the residents once he got there. I can definitely see Greg chatting up the sweet old ladies - I'll bet he was having as much fun as they were! And, yeah, I love the reference to his book. Okay, let's be honest: I love Greg. :D The plot is definitely thickening on the mystery. Might I suggest that their serial killer is a woman, not a man? Just a thought... But, I'm probably wrong. ;-) Thanks for the update! I can't wait for the next one!
ChristinaAngel 2008-05-31 ch 20,	abuseI really hope they find the mistake, I like the autopsy on Mr Bell, it was done in true CSI style. Also liked how everyone was really IC.
angry penguin 2008-05-30 ch 20,	abuseHopefully not too late. Out if curiousity, wouldn`t the autopsy contain the detail of Bell smoked or not? I wonder who will crack the case?
aussieforgood 2008-05-30 ch 20,	abuseAs with every update I loved the chapter. Greg suspecting Grissom of having a thing with a "golden granny" was priceless, it still makes me smile when I think about it :D Greg seems to have hit it off with Mabel, and why didn't it cross my mind that he would ask her to help him with his book, lol. Oh and I shouldn't forget D-Rob's revelation to Cath LMAO, now she has something to share with Grissom..LOL Poor Nick, sorting through all that garbage, as soon as the lonesome pack of Virginia Slims was mentioned..I had a feeling that they didnt belong to any of the neighbors and that they may belong to the killer :D Interesting...when they find the daughter in law, I have a feeling that she's gonna be someone who popped out in a previous chapter.. And I totally agree about the mistake, now when is that next update?
sasquatch223 2008-05-30 ch 20,	abuseFabulous chapter, as always. Loved Hodges' "humor".
angry penguin 2008-05-18 ch 19,	abuseChilling at the beginning. Nice to see Greg wanting to help Tyler.
ChristinaAngel 2008-05-17 ch 19,	abuseWow sorta cliffie! The insight into the killer's identity was good at the start and I liked Hodge's question!
Chelles 2008-05-15 ch 19,	abuseHm...Okay, yeah, I've got nothing. I have no idea who your killer is! Yeah, I'm really bad at this. It's a good thing I don't work in CSI. I'll just stick to being insulted by teenagers for a living. Anyway... So, our killer has a serious personal vendetta against Grissom. Well, well. Looks like Grissom was right to be glad that Sara was far away! Interesting that it's all about getting to Grissom, rather than Sara. She seems to fly under the radar, except for her romantic life. Funny that everyone knew about that except for their coworkers. :-P I liked the scene with Greg and Tyler. I could definitely seeing Greg wanting to help someone who's down. And, I LOVED Warrick's line about it being illegal to have intimate relations with coffee. That had me laughing out loud! I'm interested to see what Warrick's personal problems are, too...is that going to become a bigger part of the story, or are you leaving it alone? Or, should I wait till after tonight's episode to ask questions like that? :-P Great update! I can't wait for the next one. :-D
sasquatch223 2008-05-15 ch 19,	abuseAs usual, fantastic chapter. Nice to see Greg helping someone out. I'm ripping my hair out (okay, maybe not that) to find out who the killer is!

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