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| Phantomheart 2007-11-20 ch 2,  | abuseVery intressting, one tip though, (Not graping) Dubbel the "Talking" spaces like this, "Hi sandstorm!" he mewed, grabbing her by the scurf and pulling up out of the water, "having fun drowning?" "NO!" She mewed cuffing his ear and bagan cleaning herself. Put; "Hi sandstorm!" he mewed, grabbing her by the scurf and pulling up out of the water, "having fun drowning?" "NO!" She mewed cuffing his ear and bagan cleaning herself. |
| Freeheart 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is interesting. Update soon! |
| Queen Annie-Ferny Cullen 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuse...Intetresting. Because they've all let their original clans their names don't follow any real pattern? We'll see. --Ferntail |