|Reviews for Modern Day Romance|
| PinkHyacinth 7/2/08 . chapter 10
Suh-weet! And don't worry, the spicier the story the better! I don't know I just like lemons...hehehe. I just hope she wouldn't get pregnant or anything, for me, I wouldn't like it at all...
| Readerfreak10 7/1/08 . chapter 10
that is a great chapter...though he was cary at first
| Aranel Fae 7/1/08 . chapter 10
But it wasn't violent...Itachi wasn't violent and rough. Seriously, I thought he would've 'raped' her or something. .
Still, it was sex so, yeah. Maybe next time you could make it hardcore? Please please please!
("I'm dying out here!" He lightly smacked his forehead against the door.) That is just too cute. _
("Should I put my full ideas out there,
With a bunch of details?
Or tone it down,
'cuz this chapter was too much for you?")
Put out your full ideas dude! All the way! 3
Nice chapter anyways. Update soon!
| PykaL 7/1/08 . chapter 10
OMG! it was great! and as for me don't worry no offence at all and don't worry let your ideas flow like a river hahaha you just made my day! It was funny and spicy I don't know if I want to laugh or scream sadly I can't I'm in class right now hahaha if my teacher sees this he's going to kill me! well update! it's great as always.
by the way even if he didn't cum inside of her there's a chance she might be pregnant cause of the precum and that so... nevermind... gotta go.
take care and don't forget to update please! (I'm sorry if there's any typos .U)
| Suzakus Wings 6/28/08 . chapter 9
Yes! Yes! Fuck her until she's sore Itachi! WOO!
Damnit! Write some humping scenes or something. Dude, you have to get them all smexay with, like, whip cream and chocolate and bondage!
You know, the song "Shut up, and sleep with me" comes to mind...
You know, I agree with what Aranel Faelwen said... But like I said, you should have fed her eyes to Sheila. Or rip out Maria's vagina and fed it to the pups... On second thought, Sheila may get poisoned, so, forget that.
| Aranel Fae 6/27/08 . chapter 9
Did Itachi really slap Hikari? Did he say he was gonna shag her until she was sore? Did Hikari just punch Sasuke?
Maria should've been slapped. Maria doesn't derserved to get shagged be ANYBODY. Hikari should've punched Maria.
Poor Hikari, poor Sasuke-chan, YAY MORE S E X!
You made Sasuke-chan into a prick, I don't know if I should cry or laugh or ...die...
Me likey violent Itachi, it's a defintie turn on. Then again, any kind of Itachi is a turn on. Haha. So, how but some serious muscle-cramping, nerve-wrecking shagging? Make us happy campers! Yes precious...
Can't wait for the update. Hurry up and good luck with it.
| PinkHyacinth 6/27/08 . chapter 9
Oh My GOSH...I love this chapter! Update soon! And yes...you should have posted 10 along with it...Itachi is soo gonna you know...Hikari...
| Leh Star 6/25/08 . chapter 9
YAY! you UP-DATED! I'm so happy. The things that people get into these days. UP-DATE again, or risk breaking my poor wittle heart.
| luv4peace 6/25/08 . chapter 9
oh my god! that was unbelievably cool and awesome and juz totally nice! really cant wait for the next update! hope it comes soon!
| Trace Pierce 6/24/08 . chapter 9
Thank you so much for the update! I was getting worried there for a second... (more like a week or two, but hey, who's counting?) *wipes sweat off forehead*
The juicy part is coming! Ehehehehe... And Itachi is officially a control freak. Poor Hikari. Yay for readers! ;D
Although I do want to tie Itachi up and dangle him above an active volcano for slapping Hikari... Or maybe smother him in fish guts then tie him to a fishing pole then go fishing for Kisame... but that's my problem. I wouldn't kill him... just... torture him... a bit... a lot...
I've taken up enough of your time. Great chapter and I'll be looking for the next one! Thankies!
| Readerfreak10 6/24/08 . chapter 9
who knew he could be so...so forceful
| PykaL 6/24/08 . chapter 9
Oh my god I think my jaw's goinna hit the floor any minute now, first he hits her and now he wants to f**k her? this is way too good, please hurry, I really need to read the next chappie! please update... and I'll give you a nice, big and tasty chocolate cookie he? *wink, wink*
Please update!... even if you don't want the cookie xD
| Aranel Fae 6/14/08 . chapter 8
CURSE CLIFFHANGERS! Die die die die die! AH THE TENSION KILLS US!
*sad funeral song then...*
Ta da! *revives*
I'll kill you if you don't update soon. I even went through the hassle of adding this to my favourites list. Tcha.
Neechan will update, ne? Cuz Ara-chan asked cutely? *pout*
Anywhos, I absolutely love this story. Like OMFG! *re-dies*
But yeah...though I should mention a few grammatical errors here and there. ;P
Now, your little arse better stay in front that laptop/computer and you better write that update.
Ah, what's that you say? Can't do it?
*pulls out Sweeny Todd's knife-thingy and smiles sweetly*
| dark soul 1313 6/14/08 . chapter 8
evil cliffhangers! hurry with chapter 9!
| PinkHyacinth 6/9/08 . chapter 8
Huh? Why did you end it there? Who was smirking at her? Sasuke? That b**ch Maria? Or Sheila? Okay I know it's random but if dogs can play fetch I bet they can even smirk! Hehehehe...update soon!