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Reviews For: Broken Angel

yumeniai
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseaw, how sad...
Silver-Serval
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseOh... I hate the evil Riff... He ends up causing Cain so much unneeded pain.
Sorryll
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseUgh I think you just killed me! Why havent I read anything b you before? This was fantastic...

The image of Cain kissing Riff while killing him is...strangely romantic and is poignant enough to inspire me to get my ** back to writin my own fics. Seriously wonderful. Love to you
MoonFox23
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseO__o; How cruel. I've read the last volume on a site which translated the words (no pictures though) so when I read teh end of this I tried to compare both endings. ;--; You didn't have to do that, Cain! In the manga Riff loved you so much he shot himself in the arm to keep from hurting you!
momo
2007-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, this was really intense, made even more so by the song (breaking benjamin-breath?) it was a really good choice!

I haven't yet read books 3-6, so im like really frustrated because i've been seriously craving them!!

I like how Cain gently kissed Riff at the end, that was the clincher! I seriously had tears in my eyes, please post another part!!
Ame Ulan
2007-11-21
ch 1,
abuseAdded it to C2.

This was actually very cute. In an angsty sort of way. Nicely written however, it may just be me, but in my own opinion, it may have sounded more elegant if it had been written in third person and if the lyrics had been left out or for the end. But overall, very sweet and thank you for the offer once again.
Xx.Foaminians.of.the.Future...
2007-11-19
ch 1,
abuseCAIN WINS! WOHOO!!
=D love it
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