I love how you've done it from Sirius' perspective, and not overdone with any of the usual L/J fic clichés. Well done. :)

cute!

very creatively written. few writers can pull of writing styles with a pattern to it. i loved the sirius' boyish descriptions of the colors alongside james' lovesick descriptions of colors. really great. i LOVED IT.

I loved when Sirius was all exasperated, and thought he was Loony!

Oh goodness, I can't believe I haven't reviewed this fix yet! I love it so much, really. The fluff was tasteful and adorable and I love your style. The only thing I have complaint for is a tiny thing really; at one point, you wrote Sirius wasn't Hearing, and I didn't know if the capitalization was intentional or not. See that's how good it was; that was the only thing I felt I needed to point out. Bravo! Bisous the shattered star

LOLOLOL This was cute, funny and touching while basically staying in character. I like the pattern/theme you had going, and the descriptions of the colours were great.

Amusing silliness. I loved it!

haha cracked me up! so sirius(as i see him)!

It's cute although it needs to have an ending where Lily and James get together.

Nice one!

Simply lovely

Nice colour story :)

I loved the comments at the end of each section, about how James was going loony.

And I've read this, so I'm reviewing.

Wonderful, splendid narration about the various colours of the visible spectrum. I was gushing at how poetic and beautiful it was.

It was a great read, thank you!

extremely cute one-shot! it was adorable! I wish there were more original ones like these...:)

Ah, this is a sweet one. I love that we get to see James go batty from Sirius' perspective. And that he is ALWAYS talking about Lily. Sirius' little remarks crack me up. :) Thank you for sharing!