 Momochuu 2007-12-21 . chapter 1Aww...*tear* |
 Bell 2007-12-15 . chapter 1 PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY ABOUT THE POTTER-MALFOY FAMILY. |
 CatJetRat 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Lol, I still follow you. But that story was damn depressing. Still good. Hope you come out with a sequel to HPCoF soon! Adios!
-CatJetRat |
 InuLorien 2007-11-22 . chapter 1i think i can understand why you hate it. Not hate it, but...you get frustrated when you read it. It feels like it's lacking something. Just a bit of substance... some incredible tying-togetherness of the story, and i think it'sm issing that... of course you ciould be reading this and thinking, dude, abby, you're an idiot, that's not at all what i'm thinking. but i have no idea. i think you need a bit than just "draco lost his parents to the light side. harry lost his loved ones to the dark side. draco still loves him despite all that." it's just...a bit straightforward. you need more mystery and profundity (if that's not a word, i'm making it one), you see? I have no idea. it's quite good...just...could be better. Think you understand? |
 Mimi Moonstone 2007-11-20 . chapter 1That's sad . . .
TT_TT |
 Erytha 2007-11-20 . chapter 1this is a very good oneshot!! i really hope u do come back to fandom!! |
 Demitria Miriam 2007-11-19 . chapter 1...ah. I knew I read this before! I thought you had it up already but no. Great job! I love the angstyness! And the great thing about it is that it makes me want to write on HPSRH~!! OMFG! lol
Oh, and I take back everything I said about "you should save and go see Adi" noo! I want you to see me, too! *sobs*
-DM |
 Dizi 85 2007-11-19 . chapter 1aw, reyn! what a lovely one shot! it tis beautiful!
now, i need ur permission for something... i want to put a link to COF on my new website, can i PLEASE?/
talk soon, love your work,and can WAIT for COF2!
Dizi |
 Star Sapphirex 2007-11-19 . chapter 1Really liked this one. In fact, I believe this is my first time reading a fanfic of HPDM even though I've enjoyed that fandom for a long while now. It's kinda odd. Anyhow, I can't seem to properly articulate how I felt reading this nice oneshot; it was really mystical and emotionally suspenseful (those words are the closest to proper as I can think of right now). Great job on this one!
Btw, part of the title is misspelled as "decieved" although in the actual chapter, it's spelled correctly ^^, just thought I'd let you know... |
 thrnbrooke 2007-11-19 . chapter 1OMG! Draco didn't betray Harry! Harry is not only about to kill Draco but if Voldemort doesn't kill Harry, he's about to become the next Dark Lord. |
 Beth5572 2007-11-19 . chapter 1I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri |
 roshi-xx 2007-11-19 . chapter 1Eh, everyone goes through their slumps. It was amazing.
Take your time, and when you do get round to it... I'll review EVERY chapter |