...O.O... wow kool plez update soon!

oh, plz make the next one! its so good!

gah! what happens?! cliffhanger, but really good syorytelling.

this was too short!
update asap!

Hmm. Old man? Must be Sasori's favorite puppet. Update soon.

Wish the chapters were longer. D:
Update soon. :]

0oh!

Hmm, well I like the idea but I think this could be better if you made your chapters a bit longer.

OMG please continue soon!!i can't wait to see what's gonna hapen next ^^

Just a tip: make the chapters longer ^^

WHO IS IT?! WHO IS IT?! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! please...