I thought it was ok. But you should have added a little more to it. I'm not saying I'm an expert though I still have to write my first fan fic. Any suggestions for fanfics I should read.
It was a good song pairing, but I enjoy your other song fics a little more. Sissi and Odd just don't seem like a good pairing to me. What do you think? What's your reason for liking or disliking SissixOdd fics