Absolutely superb description. This story demands to be read slowly and carefully. Well done.

A beautiful story.

very good

Wow. Simply wow. Ok, I must say first, I'm a nut for fluff. That being said, may I give you some honest critique? I love the concept. Very cute! It made me blush, I laughed, I got teary eyed, it was magic. lol. However, you're writing has some room for improvement. Try not to use terms like visage and stuff unless you wanna be super poetic. I think in trying to avoid saying "she" and "he" or even using their names, what you used to place the focus on them wasn't particularly eye-catching. A bit of work on the writing style is needed but the story was good and I did enjoy it. Keep at it!

Should have reviewed this a lot sooner.
That was such an adorable story! Hope you write more with this pairing.

I love it, very well done!

Aww!! How sweet!

Congratulations on a fantastic story.
-NMH

Aw, i liked the end, those two were so cute together, normally i support Odlita ('cause who needs canon anyways?) but this was so kute

Complete and utter fluff and I absolutely LOVED it!!

Jeremy and Aelita make such a great couple it's a shame both them and Yumi/Ulrich won't be 'offical' couples by CL's end. But it's fun little stories like this that show just how right J+A are for each other!

Kudos on a fun little read!

A very touching and sweet fic, great work.

Hehheh, I love this story. REally cute too.

Absolutely gorgeous story. Damn...

Great job girl!