Please Athrun...wake up already...

Cagalli...I'll shed tears for you...

That is one angsty fic. Ouch.

I wasn't going to read anything today.
But the title stopped me. Very bold.

In brief. I loved. Just loved. Perfect.
She made a deal with the devil. He won´t wake up, but he wont die. Yeah, Perfect.
There is nothing more to say, because it is all there.

XD

oh my gosh...*my eyes is stinging...a tear escape*...

when I first glance at this I thought it was boring...but after reading "Being Athrun Zala"...I totally understand what the heckis going on...

WHY?!...my heart is in chaos...cry me a river...that is what I'm doing right now...*reach over for a tissue*...why is this happening?...

I'm just speechless...astounded...I mean Cagalli didn't visit Athrun until a week later...and Athrun is in coma... I so did not know that he got shot six times...I'm suprise he is still alive...but I think I do know why she didn't visit him...maybe she's too scare to do so...

I mean...come on...what will happen?...Cagalli..I'm so mad at her..."With the pain comes the realization that you have hurt him with your inability to make a closure. He is selfish for wanting you to be the one who puts the closure, but you cannot let him go either"...ugh...that sentences...oh my gosh...I need tissues...*run to get more tissue*...

okay I'm back...*a new open box of tissue right next to me*..but I don't get the last line..."You wish he will, and only then you will embrace the courage to tell the devil that you have had enough"...enough of what?...is she finally going to get closure between her and Athrun??...or something totally different?...

Ah...but Cagalli is feeling the regrets now...yeah..just wait until...Athrun get shot...six times!...before she does anything with their relationship, if you can call it that...

but awesome...oh my gosh...you just have to update now!...I mean like Right NOW!...I have to know...let me know what will happen next...

anyways...good luck and happry writngs!

p.s. don't you just love my long review?...*wink*...

Congratulations on using second person narration successfully. Much more often than not, when I see this attempted, after reading "you walk into a bookstore... you find a book... you buy the book... you walk out..." the only thought that comes to mind is 'Like hell I do" before you decide to stop reading. Having it narrated as a reflection of her thoughts was very insightful.

this is sad =S but then it's ok.. it's time for cagalli to suffer in sideline with your other fic (BAZ) hehe just hope that BAZ will end happily =)

Ohh... I wonder what happened. Update soon =)

...*tears*

talking to Cags eh?

for his own good..

nyWeiZ, few thoughts that came in when I read this.. ^^ btw, I'll try not to review the way like I always do when it comes to you.. ^_^ is this going to continue? or are the rest in BAZ? oh! how's BAZ coming? suteki! jaa ne! ;3