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| Ron Lover6789 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is my favorite of your stories! It's so cute. One thing: Sudden feelings like she just got wouldn't just spring themselves on like that,would they? I mean, I'm certainly not an expert on relationships (believe me...) but wouldn't there have to be a little build up? Or is it because he comforted her when she needed it? Anyway, great story! I loved it! |
| ArtChick 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet. I liked that you took that memory from the 7th book and used it to your advantage, twisting it to make it romantic. "The Prince's Tale" has to be one of my favorite chapters in Deathly Hallows. Good Work, and I hope you update From Joker to Gentlemen and Life and Love After Death soon! ~ArtChick |
| Cherlemagne 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseYou did a great job. I never thought that Lily might cry, because of what Severus said. Liked it. |
| redglasses 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing fic! Loved the talk between Lily and Snape - you wrote that really well. redglasses |
| weasleyismyprince 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseWow that was so cute! Please Update! |
| xHeavilyxBrokenx 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet. You know when I first read Deathly Hallows I felt really sorry for Snape...I still do, but now I understand where Lily is coming from. Humiliated or not Snape still shouldn't have called her what he did. That is not what a friend would have done. Anyway...back to the story. I am in love with the James in your fic...especially at the part where he just walks away from an entranced Lily and says the "life's weird like that" line...cute. Great job, I love how you described Lily's reaction to the kiss. Beautiful! |
| that belle 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseAmazing... I thought this was really powerful. All the characters were 'in character', too. Brilliant! |
| lilsnjamesy 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abusereally nice! |
| GlindaFied26 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseAw so sweet. Good job =] |
| MfluvLJ 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseso AMAZING! wow! |