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Reviews For: On a Midnight in May

Ron Lover6789
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is my favorite of your stories! It's so cute.

One thing: Sudden feelings like she just got wouldn't just spring themselves on like that,would they? I mean, I'm certainly not an expert on relationships (believe me...) but wouldn't there have to be a little build up? Or is it because he comforted her when she needed it?

Anyway, great story! I loved it!
ArtChick
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was really sweet.

I liked that you took that memory from the 7th book and used it to your advantage, twisting it to make it romantic.

"The Prince's Tale" has to be one of my favorite chapters in Deathly Hallows.

Good Work, and I hope you update From Joker to Gentlemen and Life and Love After Death soon!

~ArtChick
Cherlemagne
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseYou did a great job. I never thought that Lily might cry, because of what Severus said. Liked it.
redglasses
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseAmazing fic!
Loved the talk between Lily and Snape - you wrote that really well.
redglasses
weasleyismyprince
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseWow that was so cute! Please Update!
xHeavilyxBrokenx
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was really sweet. You know when I first read Deathly Hallows I felt really sorry for Snape...I still do, but now I understand where Lily is coming from. Humiliated or not Snape still shouldn't have called her what he did. That is not what a friend would have done. Anyway...back to the story. I am in love with the James in your fic...especially at the part where he just walks away from an entranced Lily and says the "life's weird like that" line...cute. Great job, I love how you described Lily's reaction to the kiss. Beautiful!
that belle
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseAmazing... I thought this was really powerful. All the characters were 'in character', too. Brilliant!
lilsnjamesy
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abusereally nice!
GlindaFied26
2007-11-19
ch 1,
abuseAw so sweet. Good job =]
MfluvLJ
2007-11-19
ch 1,
abuseso AMAZING! wow!
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