Aww that was so sad but that was great story! Keep making more story's about her!

This was very good. You really could feel the emotion of the story and I hope that you write more stories.

Not lame, cool, depressing, (not in a bad way!) but the end was just.. ANYWAY! the sequel was a good Idea, I'll keep a look out!

Yeah, its totally lame... Pysche! I liked it and it would be great to see it from another charater's point of view.

Good Job!