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Sun-chan1
2008-09-19 . chapter 14
These fics are abosultly awesome! I espically liked the last two since they deal with what might have happened in Season 4.
trecebo
2008-09-19 . chapter 14
Okay, now that's just not good. I'm with you on this Ruby thing. You might have to transfer her to the EC-verse and let someone take real good care of her.
trecebo
2008-09-19 . chapter 13
Never a dull moment with you, L7. Especially with those boys and the way you play with them. Whoa, and whoa again.
Star Mage1
2008-09-19 . chapter 14
I love the way you wrote Ruby. It is a very interesting characterization.
Lita of Jupiter
2008-09-19 . chapter 14
Perfect!
I loved how Ruby tortures the girl so much and Sam doesn't realize and doesn't care!
I hope he realizes that there is someone real bellow and that the ends do not justify the means... at all
Sol
2008-09-19 . chapter 14
Ooh... I like the first part better, I think, but this was good too. Dean wondering if he's still trapped in hell, Ruby being... well. Ruby.

Sam needs to get his act together. Now. Though I would LOVE to see your insight as to what the hell was going through that boy's mind during all of this.

Seriously.
Rebel Goddess
2008-08-05 . chapter 12
I like the idea of choosing evil on your own because of the yellow-eyed demons' ways. I guessed before the green eyes line but it confirmed it but I didn't guess the final line. Great one-shot. That would be true hell for Dean.
NoviceWordsmith
2008-05-26 . chapter 12
Whew!
Very skillful use of 1st person narrator. Good character voice. Very good use of veiled references: I got to the 3rd from the last paragraph before it began to dawn on me who the narrator was (or might be).
Your style is very clean, compact, and tense while still allowing the narrator to sound casual. It created the atmosphere very successfully.
If the bit with the uncle had not been there, I would have been less confused; but that intrusion of (normalcy?) left your final sentence very confusing to me. Perhaps it would be clearer if I was familiar with the series this is based on.
Fine craftsmanship, as always. Congratulations!
(By the way, when did you publish this? I only got notification about it sometime around May 5th.)
clclemmons
2008-05-17 . chapter 12
WOW! This was great, loved it.
randomfreak-11189
2008-05-13 . chapter 12
Interesting, interesting. I think I understand what your trying to say, but I'm not going to say incase I'm wrong. I like it, and the bit at the end about Orpheus and Eurydice was a very nice touch. I like it, keep it up!
trecebo
2008-05-11 . chapter 12
Uh, yeah. Not that that is unusual. I spend a lot of time confused. The unbearable part is how long it takes between chapters-- :P.

Question is: Do you think you're still alive? dun Dun DUN!
Pinkyiolis
2008-05-11 . chapter 12
I wasn't confused at all by this...it tied up a the end completly. And let me just say, the ending? Just...wow.

Pinky~
Blizdal
2008-05-11 . chapter 12
Damn. Just...damn. That last sentence... Everyone has their own version of Hell and his is heartbreaking. This was a great read. Very sad, but great.
Sailor Sol
2008-05-10 . chapter 12
Ow... you just broke my brain...

Does Sammy think he's still alive, or does Sammy think Dean's still alive?

I'm so confused...

All in all, though, I liked the writing style.
wild wolf free17
2008-05-10 . chapter 12
Yes.

Sam's a ghost?
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