 Sun-chan1 2008-09-19 . chapter 14These fics are abosultly awesome! I espically liked the last two since they deal with what might have happened in Season 4. |
 trecebo 2008-09-19 . chapter 14Okay, now that's just not good. I'm with you on this Ruby thing. You might have to transfer her to the EC-verse and let someone take real good care of her. |
 trecebo 2008-09-19 . chapter 13Never a dull moment with you, L7. Especially with those boys and the way you play with them. Whoa, and whoa again. |
 Star Mage1 2008-09-19 . chapter 14I love the way you wrote Ruby. It is a very interesting characterization. |
 Lita of Jupiter 2008-09-19 . chapter 14Perfect!
I loved how Ruby tortures the girl so much and Sam doesn't realize and doesn't care!
I hope he realizes that there is someone real bellow and that the ends do not justify the means... at all |
 Sol 2008-09-19 . chapter 14 Ooh... I like the first part better, I think, but this was good too. Dean wondering if he's still trapped in hell, Ruby being... well. Ruby.
Sam needs to get his act together. Now. Though I would LOVE to see your insight as to what the hell was going through that boy's mind during all of this.
Seriously. |
 Rebel Goddess 2008-08-05 . chapter 12I like the idea of choosing evil on your own because of the yellow-eyed demons' ways. I guessed before the green eyes line but it confirmed it but I didn't guess the final line. Great one-shot. That would be true hell for Dean. |
 NoviceWordsmith 2008-05-26 . chapter 12 Whew!
Very skillful use of 1st person narrator. Good character voice. Very good use of veiled references: I got to the 3rd from the last paragraph before it began to dawn on me who the narrator was (or might be).
Your style is very clean, compact, and tense while still allowing the narrator to sound casual. It created the atmosphere very successfully.
If the bit with the uncle had not been there, I would have been less confused; but that intrusion of (normalcy?) left your final sentence very confusing to me. Perhaps it would be clearer if I was familiar with the series this is based on.
Fine craftsmanship, as always. Congratulations!
(By the way, when did you publish this? I only got notification about it sometime around May 5th.) |
 clclemmons 2008-05-17 . chapter 12WOW! This was great, loved it. |
 randomfreak-11189 2008-05-13 . chapter 12Interesting, interesting. I think I understand what your trying to say, but I'm not going to say incase I'm wrong. I like it, and the bit at the end about Orpheus and Eurydice was a very nice touch. I like it, keep it up! |
 trecebo 2008-05-11 . chapter 12Uh, yeah. Not that that is unusual. I spend a lot of time confused. The unbearable part is how long it takes between chapters-- :P.
Question is: Do you think you're still alive? dun Dun DUN! |
 Pinkyiolis 2008-05-11 . chapter 12I wasn't confused at all by this...it tied up a the end completly. And let me just say, the ending? Just...wow.
Pinky~ |
 Blizdal 2008-05-11 . chapter 12Damn. Just...damn. That last sentence... Everyone has their own version of Hell and his is heartbreaking. This was a great read. Very sad, but great. |
 Sailor Sol 2008-05-10 . chapter 12Ow... you just broke my brain...
Does Sammy think he's still alive, or does Sammy think Dean's still alive?
I'm so confused...
All in all, though, I liked the writing style. |
 wild wolf free17 2008-05-10 . chapter 12Yes.
Sam's a ghost? |