 BornOnTheBreakOfDawn 2009-02-19 . chapter 4hmm...in a way, i find your story interesting...but i still need to comment with regards of several misspellings and errors...i was confused with ranka's reaction towards tamaki, knowing that he despises the boy but in this story he allowed tamaki to sleep at their house, in haruhi's room no less! but i understand that this is your story and i have no right to make you change your plot for this so i respect everything you wrote here and i'll continue enjoying reading your work. keep up the good work...^^ |
 CulinaryChef 2008-08-08 . chapter 10 yay! tama x haru! beautifully written |
 cattyliu816 2008-07-24 . chapter 5ahh
i love this so much! i'm going to say that for every chapter (unless i'm too lazy) |
 cattyliu816 2008-07-24 . chapter 3so cute! |
 Saiko Matsui 2008-01-24 . chapter 10Shocking of what Kyouya said he Loves! But I like the way Hikaru and Tamaki fight over Haruhi like that. Just like the love life of haruhi. Overall I love this fic and very fulfilling. |
 HannahBlack09 2008-01-20 . chapter 10omg!!
thats so sad
i loved this fict and im very sad that its over
and i cant wait to see the second part xDD
GREAT JOB ! |
 Rancorous 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Umm... Yea, hon, there's a little something called "capitalization" in the literate world. When you create a title, those with brains generally capitalize all the words with the exception of a few. "Is" and "calling" and "me" don't happen to be the exception, even in extraordinarily crappy titles like yours.
Also, way to completely botch up Haruhi's personality. There is a REASON why she's a lovable heroine, NOT because she's a ridiculous idiot like you.
Tamaki may only have a rather two-dimensional personality, but that in no way means that you can degrade him even more and turn him into a complete SAP. Despite what people like you think, there's a little something readers like called "character development".
All in all, your fic needs work. A lot of work. It's not just that you fail, you just... fail. At writing. At life. At everything. Try figuring out what "characterization" first before you come up with another piece of crap like this. |
 Gaara-l0ve 2008-01-09 . chapter 9Aw hikaru.. I feel bad for him but I just love Tamaki and Haruhi together!
Looking forward to the next/last chapter! |
 eidette112 2008-01-07 . chapter 9last chapter already?! no... i expected it to be longer... huhuhuh... T_T i just hope that the last chapter will be very romantic... |
 HannahBlack09 2007-12-31 . chapter 8poor hikaru...
but he has to understand that haruhi and tamaki are meant together xDD
nice job !^^ |
 Miznotch 2007-12-31 . chapter 8thank you for updating!! i was just surprised Haruhi being so direct with Hikaru...but it was a good chapter |
 Andie Hitachiin 2007-12-29 . chapter 7OMG! Kyouya and renge is the perfect couple! I love this! partially because nobaody has Kaoru and if you plan to have some one come in and take his love *sharpens butcher knife* jk jk.
UPDATE NOW! |
 HannahBlack09 2007-12-28 . chapter 7kyouya and renge would be definitly a very weird couple xDD
but i loved the fact that you resalted that
kyouya's sensitive part of him x3 so cute!
nice job
loved the ending by the way : ) |
 Tori Kay 2007-12-27 . chapter 7Lol.
Now everyone (Kyouya, I mean) is up to speed.
Wow, that confession from Kyouya about his love for Renge came out of NOWHERE! I was completely thrown for a loop like Haruhi. Lol.
Update soon! I wanna find out what happens next!
- Tori Kay |
 HiddenSecrets831 2007-12-24 . chapter 6;) Sorry I havent reveiwed for a while. Poor Hikaru so sad :'( but hikaru cant have haruhi she belongs to tamaki! |