i love love love it!! :D
ur the best!

Ah, another fantastic story that I finally caught up on.

I really love how you progress your stories. You don't rush it. you let things work out and happen in a realistic time frame and manner.

And I really enjoy how your characters have depth to them. I think one of my favorite aspects of this story is your characterization of Tim. He's still the lovable goof from the show that we know, but he's also got this sweet and smart and vulnerable side. The show makes him so two-dimensional sometimes, but in your story he has true depth. He feels like a real person.

And I really enjoyed your original character of Matt. It makes alot of sense that something happened when they were younger to make him so protective of Haley. I figured something like that must've occurred.

Also, I really adore how you work in lines and other elements of OTH into your stories. With the "Don't say I never gave you anything" line which is a total must but you also even work in more skillfully things like the "23" tattoo and Matt being the one to say Luke's words in the show about how it was so like Nathan to have Haley branded. Or how you use the concept of the car accident in your story to give Matt a wake-up call and it's Haley who has to go to see Solaris for her brother. You just do a fantastic job.

What I really enjoy about your stories is that they play out in my head as so real and as such good story-telling. I read alot of fanfiction, but the way you write -- with the awesome story twists and great dialogue and character development -- you really would make a fantastic script writer. I could see each of your chapters playing out like an episode and boy would I love to see it on TV.

Aww! I Loved It So much It Was Amazing! I Loved How Everyone Came Together In The End And How Everyone Found Someone To Be With I Really Liked It! Especially That Matt Finally Accepted Naley! This Story Was Brilliant I Was Completly Hooked On It! Great Job One Of My Favourites Ever!

OK! Iv'e Been Reading This And OMG! It Is Amazing Iv'e Wanted To Review Every single Chapter It Is That Good But I Couldn't Stop As I Wanted To Reda On Lol But I NEEDED! To Review This One! As It Was Absaloutly! AMAZING! Your A Fantastic Writer And I LOVE This Storyline! And OMG! Nathan Is In LOve With Haley That Was So Cute! Lucas Needs To Drop It And Let Them Be Together! It's Just So Cute! I Can't Wait For Nathan To Tell Haley Thay He LOves Her! Anyway Yeah This Is Brilliant!! One Of My Fave Ever Fanfics!!

i'm on spring break and reading tons of fanfic and just hadt o comment and tell you how much i love this story. it might be my favorite, EVER! the characters were all perfect, the drama was there but nathan and haley? both so perfect! and definitely more action, hehe, so that was fun to read. ;) i was hoping they'd get married in the last chapter so we'd get to read about their first time but i love how you ended it on the roof like it all had began. :)

thanks so much for sharing your awesome stories with us! you're a great writer so thank you so much for spreading the naley love. i have you on author alert so can't wait for more updates! :)

this story is amazing i loved it

i really enjoy reading this and the ending part was funny when nathan blamed on cow to beat haley at golf... i'm little sad that it was ending, but you did great job on this... keep it up... =)

I love this story! one of my fav!

Love your story. Update soon please!

aww, great story, absolutely LOVE the last chapter with all the Naley. They're so adorable!

Hot damn. All I have to say is a jealous Nathan is a HOT Nathan. *sigh*

Haha, I agree I did not like the Grease look on Haley, mostly because of the wig.

I adore the Honeybee because I wore that exact costume not too long ago. I only wished I had my own Batman to dance with like Haley that night. The best I got were drunken frat guys dressed as giant condoms and joints. LOL Not very heroic. Hehe, but funny.

I love how hard Nathan has fallen for Haley, it's awesome to read the them reversed now. I mean obviously Haley is still very much into him, but it's nice to see how it's torturing Nathan now and has been for a good while. I'm so glad he broke up with Peyton too. I think they would have killed each other on the show if they lasted any longer and same goes for this story. LOL

I like Peyton got drunk and spilled, not that I enjoy her outing Haley, but I'm glad it's out there now about Chase so hopefully that charade will start crumbling and lead to more NH. :D

I'm loving this story already, though I have to admit the Nathan//Peyton is hard, but I see where you're going and it makes it much easier to deal with when you can tell Nathan is really hung up on our Hales. Hehe

I love you changed Haley's look, Joy always amazes me to look gorgeous no matter what shade of her, but I love her Season 5 look mostly because it does mature her and she's rocking her curves more, which are to die for. Hehe

I also want to say I enjoy you're author's notes, especially about Season 5 stuff, it seems we are on the exact same page in the way we view it and I'm glad Haley said the "D" word too, not that I want them to ever split up either, but Nathan needed a HUGE does of reality to get his ** in gear, which thankfully he did.

I just pray this season is much better than the crap we had to endure in 5.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying your stories and I would review every chapter, but I'm too excited to keep reading. LOL i was in the hospital a week or so a go for a major kindey infection and I'm still not up to par, so I've been staying home and delving into your stories has been the best medicine. It's been forever since I paused my own writing to truly enjoy other's works and I've missed it terribly.

Ok, I'll stop my Haley-esque rambling now because I have to read more. Keep up the amazing writing.

Cath

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this story is just waayay too cute!! i loved iT!!

I just read the whole story including the last three chapters I miss and Omg, I absolutely loved this story. I got a little teary eyed but it was so great. :)