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| The Pixess 2007-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh, this is so in character! And quoting Robert Frost, excellent. I love the PMSing line, lovely callousness Boq. I also agree with grey-eye about the blind line. I like Nessa's character in this, how she tries to convince herself she hates him to make the pain go away. Poor thing, we all know that never works. Great job! |
| grey-eyed-goddess 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI like. I like lots. That was amazing. Especially, "He never had a lot of insight into the thinking process of girls. In fact, he was blind to them." Yes, Boq, we've noticed. |