I wonder why I never happened to read this story before, but it's a good idea this fic is based on. L is clever enough to survive centuries, and he's reclusive too, no wonder he was able to carry out such a plot. I really do feel sorry for him, he must always remain alone. And poor Light was deceived the whole time! He must have felt really stupid at the moment of his death, a feat only L would have managed.
I enjoyed!

I hope that you are still able to write and "All for Love" will be updated someday.

L should not have explained so pointedly like that...it was rather OOC. The idea was a bit poorly developed, but this could pass off for a decent fic. You still write better than some of the authors here on this site.

while all that idea is plausible and well-constructed (L is not dead, the possibilty can't be denied.I've been thinking of that too!! xD cheerio), there is one thing I have been pondering about.
Since L's life had thrice its span and he's immortal, what about his past in Wammy's house? That scene about his childhood had to have happened!
Other than that, nothing seems to be amiss. The plot fits well with the main storyline, I guess. (though I find it hard to imagine Gevanni taking over as Watari and the fact that L is immortal. It's outrageous if you ask me, but I'm glad you extended the plot where it ended in the anime, like what happened to the characters... While on the subject, you haven't mentioned Near though!)

overall you have done a great job analyzing the plot and giving it an added ending.

KUDOS!



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Your story is really well-written and has one of the most creative plots I have ever seen from Death Note fanfics. Hope you'll continue writing more! =]

Dang! Oo! O! This is good! I mean... Wow! I'm speachless! And is this going to continue? If so, how?! Ack, now you've got me all desperate for answers! XD Anyway, keep it up!

Really nice, L does strike a person as a little dark once you look at him and with the odd mannerisims, this story fits nice. This was really cool, I liked it.

Nice story! ^^ I haven't seen the anime but I've heard how it ends, and this is a good story to go with it! ^^

I love you!
Every story of yours I read is simply amazing. You delve deeper into the meaning of everything and create these stunning mind-screwy stories.
Love it.
--~
Caeru

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Spi: ...I think she's in shock. (First time I've reviewed in awhile...) Anyways, very good, as usual. I don't really understand why this would happen, but I get why you would think of it. And yes, my favorite p[art happens to be just as Raito dies, L tells him that he should have stayed in the shadows.

Update again soon, plz!

-Momiji + Spiral

It keeps me in awe at the level of depth to your writing. How easily it seems for you to portray such complex emotions in so few, easy-to-follow words and stories.

I haven't seen the end of the anime yet, but if it's as goo as your comments suggest, then I'll be thoroughly looking forward to it. ^__^ Hope to read more of your stuff soon, whether it be "All For Love" or something new, either way...can't wait!

@D oh~!! that was incredibly well planned and written!! i normally love LxRaito, but since i still hate raito as he is in the series, this is fun~ :D Aionc is the worlds' best mother! lolz~

YEAH L ROCKS BABY~!~! I dont care if he's the evil mastermind of this all *heart heart heart* I STILL LUV U L~!1

L: O_o dude you have problems...
Me: I only have problems for u *heart heart heart*
L: WTF O
Me: Ok i admit that was a lil weird *ahem* well I LUV U L
L: Even though i was a horrible evil mastermind?
Me: Dude that makes u EVEN MORE HOTTER xD
L: O i see *smirks*
me: KYA~! I cant contain myself anymore! *glomps L*

everything eles becomes a fuzz if ya get wut i mean xD well i dont either lol xP

Ah, I can't belive he did that to Light, so coldhearted! *completely in denial that Light wanted to kill L too*
But it was good though, the story that is :D

Wow wow wow! What a completely creative and diabolical twist!! L is the one ruling over the world?! And Light was his pawn?! Oh the irony XD I love it! Oo and an interesting part was how Aionc created the Black Plague to give L a long life ~ how sweet XD

I can't say anything but WOW!

That was mindblowing O.O!