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JustWriter2
2008-09-10
ch 78,
abuse(roars with laughter) So some were sent to Earth and they interbred with the locals until they were almost completely human?


-JW`chan ^-^
Jei-El
2008-07-06
ch 71,
abuse[It came to a bit of a shock when his scanner officer seemed nervous as they entered the system to meet with the Pink skins and their Vulcan Allies.]
They better be glad they aren't on T'Lia's bad side.
[my great-grandmother thought Vulcan and Star Fleet were to slow to retrieve her great-grand daughter.]
Family sure can make things interesting. :-)
Jei-El
2008-07-05
ch 70,
abuseJust finished reading this all the way through. I love all the chapters of this AU.

My favorite Quote in this installment was: "I must admit however, that is would be agreeable to have azguard beam weapons and shields. For the moment such things are still in the science fiction arena.” Kaleb explained with a smile.

Thank you for the time and care you put into these wonderful stories.
bina W
2008-05-16
ch 64,
abuseShe still has a right to tell her parents.
Bina
bina W
2008-05-05
ch 62,
abuseHello. It is quite funny that Archer said he would rather play water polo. Amusing also is that Tpel did not want to swim due to living creatures in Earth oceans.
Bina
bina W
2008-05-05
ch 61,
abuseHello,
I liked the story and the cliffhanger.
Bina
bina W
2008-05-05
ch 60,
abuseHello. Sorry, but I did not like this chapter. It rubbed ne the wrong way. But I liek the fact that u put a full Vulcan on the opposing side.
Bina
bina W
2008-05-05
ch 59,
abuseInteresting chapter.
Bineshii
2008-03-25
ch 55,
abuseGetting exciting. Now I want to see Enterprise and friends kick butt!
Bineshii
2008-03-25
ch 54,
abuseInteresting strategy for freeing the slaves.
Bineshii
2008-03-25
ch 53,
abuseYes, good to get more explanation of the private fleet. Liked the idea that people in Starfleet and the Vulcan fleet are working together because they have family connections.
bina W
2008-03-24
ch 54,
abuseHello. I like the story so far. The scenes with Porthos were quite funny, and well written. Pls let me know when the next chapter is ready.
Bina
Bineshii
2008-03-14
ch 51,
abuseLooking forward to the rescue!
Bineshii
2008-03-05
ch 47,
abuseI like the plotting of the slaves in the last chapter and the plotting of the diplomats in this one. Love to see how these threads converge.
Bineshii
2008-02-28
ch 45,
abuseNice complication, adding the Klingon. It looks like this could get be exciting.
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