WOOHOO!!
very good.
not QUITE stephenie, but still good.
haha.
could you be bothered to comment on MY stories?
i ask those who i feel could give me good imput.
thank you if you will.

good job i like it a lot its sounds like edward. liked the line didnt know how close she had come to being killed lol

OMG i luv it! it sounds exactly as i pictured it. you are ahmazing! keep writing ur really good. =)

very sweet. you did a nice job with this, keep writing!

OMG So good! You totally have to keep doing these . . .

Krystel-chan

:):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Aw I liked it!very good first timer fanfic in EPOV. . .u should rite a couple o' more. .. thanx-mallory =)

OO. I love it. It's freaking amazing [;

SO GOOD!
you captured his view perfectly--
my only suggestion is, lengthen it.

Cute little Edward is confuzzled. GOOD!