Good. I liked it!

I don't know, I think the charterizations are fairly accurate, I mean, we don't usually see Bob or Dot during a quiet moment. Usually when we see them, they're in the middle of a problem, and people will often put up a 'face' for the public,one that may not quite match them inside. I think this is a good example of a quiet moment between Bob and Dot, one where they both let down their defences, and talk about how they felt. This was really good to read, and in my opinion, it sounds feasible.

That was really sweet. True, they were OOC, but I think that's forgiveable. :)

Hey, don't worry about the characterization. It was okay. Dot was a little OOC, but not too bad. It was a sweet story, and I liked it.