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LosingInTranslation 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseYou know I love you, right? Because after this chapter, I was a little worried. YOu may have struggled with this, but in the end, I truly believe you have created something so ultimately beautiful and perfect that it blows my mind. Well played, my friend. Well played! And just so you know I was paying attention... This passage actually made me melt a little. “Our only other choice is to give up.” “That would never be my choice, Sara.”
caro-gsr 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseGreat chapter! I love it that things between them are better :) Grissom better watch out from this killer, he seems capable of anything! PLZ UD SOON
ATrueParrothead 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseI don't know how you do it, but you always seem to write them perfectly. This was beautiful! I love how you started the chapter with the chaos of what the serial killer is feeling and then you framed it with that beautiful, touching scene between Grissom and Sara. Truly amazing!
December Wind 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseThat was awesome. It feels like forever since your last update
poppielee 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseI love this so much! I nearly killed myself trying to sit down to read this new chapter. Anyway it was worth it the emotion in this piece has always blown me away but this chapter in particular has left me speechless... Well almost. LOL The pain they both carry was so beautifully handled in your words I had a lump in my throat when they started to talk it out. Wonderfully written and so in character I wouldn't have expected anything less from such a talented writer. I look forward to more. Poppie x x x.
TDCSI 2008-10-01 ch 25,	abuseYes please can we go home now? I'm missing some good ol' action in the bedroom. ;)
JellybeanChiChi 2008-10-01 ch 25,	abuseFirst of all, these lines are simply gorgeous. "That was a peace that lulled. This was a peace that screamed." Second of all, YOU LEFT IT THERE! You scheming bi-otch! WE WANT SMUCKY! WE WANT SMUCKY! Respectfully yours, Jellybean :-0
sdbeth 2008-10-01 ch 25,	abuseThanks for the update. I enjoyed that very much. Your descriptions are excellent. So vivid. As always, the dialogue was amazingly natural. I'm always so happy when you pop up in my email story/author alerts. Beth
December Wind 2008-09-16 ch 24,	abuseK I'm confused. How come has 24 chapters and your site has 23?
tmschmitt 2008-09-15 ch 24,	abuseOMG!! how could he just walk out.. damn.. i know he's upset but still, wow.. love your stories.. keep up the great work..
leddy 2008-09-15 ch 24,	abuseSo happy to see and update, it was terrific. I like an angry Grissom. I think a lot of things are hitting him at once, but I do feel for Sara too. I have a bad feeling about Elizabeth, or possibly even Grissom. Looking forward to the next chapter.
ATrueParrothead 2008-09-15 ch 24,	abuseOh no you didn't! Why do you torment me so:) Poor, poor Grissom. I am loving the fact that their reunion isn't all sunshine and puppies. He is hurting; he has been hurting and it's wonderful to finally read him written that way. But, you know, it isn't fair to the rest of the world that you have this insane ability to get into the head of both Sara and Grissom and write them perfectly. I'm on the edge of my chair awaiting the next installment, as always.
JellybeanChiChi 2008-09-14 ch 24,	abuseYou mean the fat nurse sneaked a date with Grissom? God love her. And what's up with Grissom. He needs to calm the hell down and thank whatever God he believes in that Sara is back.
sara-sidle-csi-3 2008-09-14 ch 24,	abuseHOLY **!! woah... OMG... Grissom.. said that?! What are they going to do?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update son! Please? Oh and did I say please? lol Always, Elizabeth
sdbeth 2008-09-14 ch 24,	abuseWhoo hoo! A new chapter. Thanks so much. I like how you had Grissom get angry. It was unexpected. I'm looking forward to the resolution of her return. Beth

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