Great story!

Its real...the story felt real...

There are no happy endings...and everyone's gonna die...

And that was ridiculously pessimistic, and I do appreciate fluffy and happy fics, but this one left a raw, bitter taste in my mouth..like when one drinks black coffee...that's what made it sincere and candid...sometimes, you just dont beat around the bush and sugercoat things, you call a spade a spade...and that's what I love about your fics...

If I were to rate this fic, I would give it a good 6 out of 10...

You really do write angst well, it's not so terribly dramatic, there aren't always happy endings (at least not in this fic), and somehow, you can make it so that even though there isn't a happy ending, it's still extremely satisfying. (0.o did i spell that wrong?)

i think they will forever break my heart, yes.

Interesting:]

i really like it :)

yeah.. not sweet. but really good. not too short. sad.

so this was somewhere outside Konoha? cos if it was in Konoha, they would see each other more often than once in five years. that was really good!

zomg!

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I have nothing decent to say

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It is sweet. I like it. Not fluffy, not happy, just a very real way of Sasuke coming back and no one there to greet him, because that is how most people are. They can't keep waiting, hoping, chasing forever.

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and that reminds me, of 'ice cream and polish'. Apparently I also reviewed to that. but I don't believe it either, so here is a quick review for that (sorry I'm too lazy to sign out, review, and then sign in again).

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I really love how you protrayed their friendship. Showing that sometimes, when it gets to be too hard and too much, they fall back to their other personality and just become Girls. like they have two sides, and while one side is shown more often than the other, the second side is the one that keeps them together and prevents them from breaking.

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Wow. This was so utterly, utterly bitter - it actually made me cringe and want to cry. The awkward dialog and utter fraction between them is tangible.

And yet, it fits perfectly, as much as it pains me to realize that. Man, I wish there was a happy second chapter to this. Sasuke needs to take his head out of his $$ and maybe change things for the better! *sobs melodramatically*

hmm...im starting to wonder if u ever write uh...happy endings for this couple.

I liked it. I like this Sasuke. The one who actaully talks, but is still Sasuke in the distant sort of way.

Ta!

wow you are very talented. that was amazing and haunting. you are he first author i read that did not have her sobbing how muchshe missd him. just...wow

Augh, I apparently have this thing where I fav a story, but forget to review. Because I suck. Hard. Forgive me?

She sets her hands on the table, lifts herself off the seat

(prays he won’t notice her chipped green nails and frayed gray sleeves because weaknesses are dangerous things and he already knows too many of hers)

That's definitely my favorite line. Every time I read it, it makes me...flail? I'm not sure exactly how to put it, because it's not a happy line, per se, but it's the truth, and you hit home with it. So I guess I flail at your adequacy. (which I probably spelled wrong.)

Anyway, I loved, as usual.

i think it has a potential to be a multichapter...but as far as this one shot goes...i enjoyed it...i even felt awkward lol...but its a possible reaction to how sakura may end up feeling...but i dont think sasuke would bother tieing up loose ends with Karin...but im only so far in the manga...his attitude my change...