|Reviews for bitter cream|
| the general girl 11/23/07 . chapter 1
Love the ending.
| dark Alley 11/22/07 . chapter 1
I really like this, so much if fact, i would greatly enjoy if you continued this.
| shewhogoesblah 11/22/07 . chapter 1
I loved how bittersweet it was. Seriously. It was more real... Not like all those cliche Happily Ever After SasuSaku fics... A job well done!
| nickygirl 11/21/07 . chapter 1
that was really nice, really. very more real like. i liked it.
| ohwhatsherface 11/21/07 . chapter 1
i love the bitterness. seriously. i love bitter angst. its just so perfectly human to be bitter.
ugh, WHY MUST YOU ROCK, SO?
“Oh, did you knock her out and leave her on a bench, too? Or was that dubious honor reserved for just me?”
LOVELY. totally well said.
and i found this very well written.
| biancaBOMB 11/21/07 . chapter 1
sad. . .i guess. . .
-pauses and looks around-
I LIKE POTATOES. . . :D
| the tomato 11/21/07 . chapter 1
ow ...it burns *runs around in unhappy circles*oh well it was well put together it just makes me a little sad...
| coconutmandarin 11/20/07 . chapter 1
Strange, but sexy in a way, I suppose. Liked it.
| hanihami 11/20/07 . chapter 1
The ending was kind of sad, I liked it though. Shows a realistic possibility.
| Bored Konoha Kunoichi 11/20/07 . chapter 1
wow, this was beautifully written
I loved the ending, because you didn't state a "definite" ending, but it's sort of left open to our minds
I do not know how you are capable of writing like this- with only a few words, they already become a beautiful story
I'm very jealous- I really wish I could write like that..
Anyways, nice one-shot, and please update!
| StarSparklez 11/20/07 . chapter 1
Hmm. Bitter. Like the coffee. If that's what you were aiming for, then I declare you've succeeded. :)
| Annie Sparklecakes 11/20/07 . chapter 1
Oh man. How do you do that thing, with simple words making up a beutful story with so many twists and-God. I don't even kniw how to descrbe your wrting, except it's pretty and perfect andso... realistic, somehow. I want you to wrte my life D:
| bell.esque 11/20/07 . chapter 1
It was like...nice. I liked it. XD
But I think maybe it was because I like rather bitter and depressing things. It moves my heart.
It works nicely. :3 I read the one on your LJ before it was SasuSaku TRANSFORMED!
| mipapo 11/20/07 . chapter 1
Is there (Would there) be an alternative ending?
As in -happy- way of ending things.
or a sequel?
Or any sort of continuation lol.
well if there is, I'd like to know :]
but this was nice reading.
and the fact that his left ring finger was unoccupied made me relieved too lol.