Love the ending.

Keep writing.

I really like this, so much if fact, i would greatly enjoy if you continued this.

I loved how bittersweet it was. Seriously. It was more real... Not like all those cliche Happily Ever After SasuSaku fics... A job well done!

that was really nice, really. very more real like. i liked it.

love always

nickygirl

i love the bitterness. seriously. i love bitter angst. its just so perfectly human to be bitter.

ugh, WHY MUST YOU ROCK, SO?

“Oh, did you knock her out and leave her on a bench, too? Or was that dubious honor reserved for just me?”

LOVELY. totally well said.

and i found this very well written.

heart.

sad. . .i guess. . .

-pauses and looks around-

I LIKE POTATOES. . . :D

ow ...it burns *runs around in unhappy circles*oh well it was well put together it just makes me a little sad...

Strange, but sexy in a way, I suppose. Liked it.

The ending was kind of sad, I liked it though. Shows a realistic possibility.

Poor Sakura

wow, this was beautifully written

I loved the ending, because you didn't state a "definite" ending, but it's sort of left open to our minds

I do not know how you are capable of writing like this- with only a few words, they already become a beautiful story

I'm very jealous- I really wish I could write like that..

Anyways, nice one-shot, and please update!

Nice job!

Hmm. Bitter. Like the coffee. If that's what you were aiming for, then I declare you've succeeded. :)

Oh man. How do you do that thing, with simple words making up a beutful story with so many twists and-God. I don't even kniw how to descrbe your wrting, except it's pretty and perfect andso... realistic, somehow. I want you to wrte my life D:

It was like...nice. I liked it. XD

But I think maybe it was because I like rather bitter and depressing things. It moves my heart.

It works nicely. :3 I read the one on your LJ before it was SasuSaku TRANSFORMED!

Is there (Would there) be an alternative ending?

As in -happy- way of ending things.

or a sequel?

Or any sort of continuation lol.

well if there is, I'd like to know :]

but this was nice reading.

and the fact that his left ring finger was unoccupied made me relieved too lol.