Wow! Great job. The comparison to Dally was great. And you did an awesome job in showing how war can drive someone crazy. I'm listening to the song now, and it really fits.

Happy Thanksgiving to you too!

I like it. For a second, I thought about how you never really mentioned Steve or any thing that would qualify this as a Soda fic, so you technically could have passed it off as Steve. But then as I was reading it, I realized that it just sounds like Soda. I think that's a real talent.

I enjoyed it, although I think I agree with you. Not your best, but certainly still good.

I'm excited to read the other one-shots, if you do decide to post them. And I'm still hoping for more of Don't Think Twice.

: )

I really loved this one shot;
All the little details such as the letter, the comparison to Dallas and everything was so well done. It felt really realistic and was incredibly powerful.
It's so refreshing to see this serious side to Soda, and you write him really well.
Great job!
Another Illusion

Great story. Very insightful almost to the point of being poetic. Is this a one shot? Hope not, it's really interesting to see a deeper intellectual/sensitive side to Soda. Thanks!

Merry Turkey Day, right back at you!

Pretty good fic! I enjoyed it, and no, not too choppy. I figure that it you're in war, you're allowed to have random thoughts that don't exactly follow perfectly.

Nice; as I mentioned privately I liked the comparison to Dallas Winston you've used here. I thought it was rather appropriate.

You already know what I think ... this is full of win! :)

review number 1~~! yay! i really like it! it didn't sound all that choppy from where I'm standing. I really liked the POV. good job!