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| Moira Absinthe 2008-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseAw, I just want to huggle little Isaak. Poor baby. Very good story, everything was written so well. |
| agapi mouSchwarzung 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked your fic, the way in wich you manage Cain is simply wonderfull. The moment and your descriptions are very entracing. I like your style a lot |
| gare de lyon 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abusewell written man |
| sphinxofthenile 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was soo beautiful! I loved the way you described Isaak here, and Cain was just plain enchanting. The explanation for his name is very sad, but fitting. Keep up the good work!^^ |
| Werewolf of Fire 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI'm an angsty!fluff fan. So even with all the angst, I can't help but go "aww". Especially because of the image of Isaak in a wedding dress (it was red!), my brain threw at me when Cain mentioned them being 'wedded'. Though the image of a crying Isaak is rather cute too. And the sharing of blood. And the way Cain thinks. And - You get the point. Aside from the cute factor, I'm forever wowed by your ability to write the characters perfectly. Despite Isaak crying (it's really, really hard to imagine!) their interaction was just so perfect. Especially with the challenging God talk, only Isaak would argue with a God. *shakes head* Anyway, I rather enjoyed this. Loved it in fact (It's the crying Isaak and tender-acting Cain). Awesome work, m'dear! ^_^ - Woffy |
| LadyAssassin27 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseSober and Insane at the same time, and of course brilliant as always. I really liked the naming ... it make perfect sense, and definatly adds to the dark mysterious person that is Issak. Although it makes me wonder about Cain really ... is he really this infactuated or is this just a passing phase with him? But it was the last line that really got me thinking, i don't know why but i though of Abel for a moment when i read it. |
| Svadilfari 2007-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was such an amazingly insane driven fic. The emotions that swirled around the two was dark, glorious and tainted with madness. Utterly gorgeous. More so, since I am very fond of Isaak. The naming ceremony was done very well. I imagine (at least, how I warped it) that Cain wouldn't have been too thrilled with Dietrich's later relationship with Isaak. Hm...added motive for removing the Terran? |