so good! ah you write shikamaru the secretly in love cynic so well. i loved it.

Adorable! :D

Beautiful.

Honestly, that was the first word that came to my mind to describe this story. It was written extremely well, with a smooth flow and admirable conventions. I loved Shikamaru's incredible humor and feel that you did not disappoint with his chemistry with Ino. :)

That was different than I thought it would be but in a good way :) It was super cute :) So cute that it'll cause one's teeth to rot XD

That, my friend, was cute. So cute, it should be illegal. Loved. Loved. And loved.

super-cute! You write Shikamaru really well!

From start to finish, this story was incredible...and funny. Oh, Shikamaru. He's my favorite Naruto character and I must say you certainly did him justice.

ohmy shikamaru knows everything about the shinobi soap eh? ;)

i guess he's a closet romantic, deep (DEEP DEEP DEEP) down inside :D

and the way you write him being sweet at an unexpected moment, i really like that!

OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT'S FREAKIN' INSANE I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT.

(and what the hell, Neji likes it?) Yes, Neji is awesomeness, but the way you write Shikamaru is even more awesomeness. Because the way you write him is amazing and hilarious.

That would be so funny, if "Shinobi Passions" were real, and Kyou turned out to be gay... Awesome!

I am kicking myself that I didn't think of something like "shinobi Passions!" I like the subtle jibes at the fandom through the pairing of characters on the show.

"Cliché display of ridiculous irrationality?"

Holy crap, this is the BEST line I have ever heard. I'm totally sending this story to my friends, it's great.

Aw!

Cute!

The other girl in the drama is Temari, and she can stuff off with Iruka. Kaythanks. Really really adorable. I like it. :D

very nice.. good job.. )

love this piece. so very cute. SO. VERY. CUTE.

You are a good writer. I've said that before, but I just find it true! Your sentences are well-structured, your imagery is abundant, you're writing is funny and your word-choice is fantastic. I just think you're very good at this.