that kind of did reflect Shirosaki ... no it did reflect Shiro-kun a lot how did you come up with it??

I like this a lot :)
great job!

a lot said in little words-it's excellent and i can't believe it's ur first anime poem! I actually don't read poems much but i give them chances a few times when i stumble upon them, haha.

Surprisingly, this is going to my favs! xD

AH ::runs around like a chicken with his head cut off untill he hits a wall:: The pure goodness of this poem made me loose my mind for a bit there... ::laughs nervously and rubs the back of his head::

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And you told me your poems sucked... not so much? =D Good one, I'd like to see some more hollow Ichigo stuff from you, my crazy little crack bunny ::winks::

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Long review, and a bit... strange... I should really sleep every once in a while XD

Awesome poem ^^

Cya,

SleekGalz