UPDATE! This story is so cute so far! DarryxPony is awesome!^^ So, please continue?

Update soon! XD Love it!^^

Michele! you are funny! I saw that comment down at the bottom and it made me laugh! And you tell NOADS to f*ck off and get a goddamn life! Good story!

Wow, this made me cry. haha
Honestly, I love this fic! What a masterpiece!! :)

Aww, I wish you continued this, it is very cute ^_^ I think it could still make a really great story if it was continued. Think about it? =]

Not only are the ages in this story screwed up, stuff like this is just SICK. You should at least have an INCEST warning. By the way, here are some flames to put in your grill.

FLAMES

AH WHAT THE ** WHY

this story is excellent..you shoutl continue it please...

I like how this story started I think you should continue it. And to those who are ** about incest. THEY'RE FICTIONAL CHARACTERS yes incest in real life would be emotionally scaring but this is a STORY NOT reality so drop it if you don't like it DON"T READ IT! Honestly it's a simple consept.

This story is turning out really interesting so far. I hope you continue!

Oh wow, I hope you do continue...this was really well written. The characters emotions were caught well too, I felt so bad for them.

There's a difference between being open-minded and breaking certain social taboos which are pretty deeply seated. The majority (vast majority, I'd say) of people who contemplate sex with their sibling reach for the barf bag in about two seconds. So being so open-minded your brain falls out is probably not a good thing, nor is being open-"mined".

NOADS shut up if you don,t like incest don,t read. u should be more OPEN MINED ABOUT THINGS!

if your not your going to, your going to lose out on a lot
i really pity you cause i used to be like that to lol but anime open up my eyes to new things!

good story lol please update and don,t listen to that retard NOADS!

UPDATE!! please? lol

i love it