I like this, please update!
:D

You should totally continue this! i love the plot and how you ended the first chapter! i really hope to see more in the near future!

I like this beginning! Continue writing, please?

This is a pretty epic idea, and I really like the concept of it, and the first chapter too. Zexion is so thoughtful and in-character. I really like it, and I don't think that you should drop it. I'd like to see a new update soon actually!

This was a very interesting chapter and I would love it if you continued this. :3

Okay, I realize you probably haven't thought about this in a year and a half, at least, but seriously. The idea rocks, just like your other stories do.
And yes, I am far too lazy to review your other stories that I've read. STFU.

Anyway, just a shout-out. You rock my world.
Yeah. Shutting up.

~Wolfie

I really like it a lot. Zexion does sound in character, so you're doing well on that aspect. It is a good idea, and the first chapter is plenty good. It'd be really great if you continue this one. You write very well (HTSIBWRC is enough testimony to that statement). I'm looking forward to reading more :D

Nobody psychology is quite interesting.

Even if Demyx may seem like a childish character for those who only initially speak to him, his words do make a point. I especially like how you mentioned the fact that life would be less complicated if we stopped making it complicated. Demyx had been wise in that concept. His denial adds to his character, which you tried to portray here. I commend you for that.

I am deeply impressed that Zexion had stayed in front of Demyx's room for five consecutive hours. I would've gotten irritated and left after half an hour, but I would assume that Zexion has a will of steel.

But, what I really do love about your writing, your characters are extremely in character. It is unbelievable. Do you know how rare it is to find long, interesting, good stories with characters that act believable? You have accomplished a great feat. Even more amenable is the fact that one of them is Zexion; he is very complex and we don't know that much about him.

Usually first person POV irritates me, but I've put that aside for your brilliance.

Again, very good job.

I do like it. I like it a lot. Getting into Nobody psychology and all that, it's facinating. And the first chapter set you up for a great plot.

Dude, it's been over 10 months now! Get off your butt please and write another chapter! This is a realy great idea just like you said! I wanna read more of it!

So. . . Are you going to continue this? It's been nearly a year. I thought it was a lovely start and I like the fact that you're in Zexy's POV. And Demnyx is so huggable. =3 But of course Zexy'll fall for him eventually. Teehee. So continue, yes? I'd like to see how you actually get to the point when they're, y'know, together. XP

Wow. This is so good. Like, seriously. Zemyx is one of my favourite pairings, and you've characterised them both so brilliantly here. It's pure genius. Please continue this, because I'm really hoping to see where you'll go with it! It is too good to just drop! Not that I'm going to annoyingly pester you, or anything, but it has a lot of potential and the first chapter was a masterpiece.

Hmm, a very interesting take... I rather like what you have going so far. ^__^ I hope you decide to continue with this!

I'm loving the way that Zexy's trying his hardest to be all mature and grown up and scientific... And failing so miserably XD

Hopefully there's more... Is there?

this is interesting...
if you do do another chapter of it I can't wait to read it.
^_^