Soo sweet story. ]

Aw, what I think is Aw...and it shows what a guy Cloud is that he says the kids can be in on the secret. (This is the proposal scene). Nice! thx mc

aw! so cute! and heck i say stuff like 'me and Amanda' all the time! it just sounds so much better to me! i dont know why, it's not proper English but it sounds better to me! :D

luve,

Fairy!

Hallo again! Gosh, I wake up and I go straight to your fanfiction. It's your writing, I tell you - it's so great. I really can't get enough.

And all the Tifa/Cloud goodies...too hard to pass up!

Okay, so it's a policy of mine to review every chapter/story that I read. I'm glad you're not gonna stop writing.

Even if it's a one page one shot of Cloud and Tifa that would make my day and more!

Thanks again for a wonderful piece. I loved how Cloud was all nervous to ask Tifa to marry him - and in front of the children! Tastefully done from Marlene's point of view.

Even without any dialogue it was just as intriguing.

Ah, and I have to go.

Time for school.

-P.P.V.V.

aww...nice ;)

Ten bucks says that Denzel won't think kissing is gross once he and Marlene hit puberty *wink*. Lol, this was a really cute proposal! Just the way I imagine Cloud popping the question.

SO freakin' cute!

It was so incredibly cute and fluffy, just the way I like it. I'm such a CloTi shipper... ;) I love how it was from Marlene's perspective instead of Cloud's, it gave it more depth and interest.

yay.

That's a really cute one-shot!

I'm glad that you added Marlene and Denzel in the story. They're so cute! :)

Awee! This is so cute! It's adorable! It's perfect.

Cloud and Tifa deserve a happily ever after. I like Marlene's point of view...and you have Marlene's character really good, which is important because it's first person and in Marlene's eyes. Kudos to you! Thanks for telling me about this. D

-Shibi

Though it was short, it was cute. What a nice, short-written, oneshot, my little freak. Hope you get better jellybean or I'll sick the crazy monkeys eating bananas in a palm tree on you... I mean it. I will. Don't think I'm not lying!... Or am I? Wait that makes no sense. I WILL sick those damn monkeys on you if it's the last thing I can do!(laughs evil) Yes... I'll sick those damn monkeys on you...Anyway, hope you get better, freak!

See ya!

nice :)

Aww... I was giggling while reading this. _

It's always so cute when it's in the kids' POVs. :)

i love it. _

Cute... X3

Cuteness. That's right Cloud you've waited long enough.

-Spark