There are always things happening.

When the formula fits, and the reader loves it, plagues in little tinder boxes leap from one line to the next to the real one a bit further down.

As timeless kids.

Wishing the running never ends.

Prancing pomegranite of my vision, there is no one left in the world that I can hold on to.

Great chapter! I loved seeing the character growth in Eric and that Diana sees it too. Good Scooby reference.

Wow, that was probably the best fanfiction experience I've had in a while. My first Sealgirl chapter under my belt, and if the rest of it is as deliciously on par as this, it definitely won't be my last. Everyone's fabulously in character, and your style - the clean clear prose - well, it's like discovering a whole bunch of episodes from the show, really, and that's wonderful.

I'll definitely be reading more of your work!

Your Eric is *perfect* in this! Great dialogue.

Also loved the descriptions of the scenery. You make everything very easy to visualize and I could imagine this animated landscape. The I Spy game was cute and Shila's line about joining the fleeing creatures made me laugh, although in my mind I heard Presto saying it instead.

You have me looking forward to more.

Couple of cool moments: Eric takes charge and everyone accepts it, Diana realizes she trust Eric and is stunned by the thought. Also I love mazes, this story is so cool!

This first chapter is really good: funny, witty and intriguing. I am looking forward to the next update, and right now, I'll start reading all your other fics (I also enjoy your writing style very much) Thanks or sharing your stories with us :)

Not one of those silver gleaming mono-rails within the story to speed things up and still it requires idly fixable certainty smothered in the humblest dripped cream slivers to pull drag push drag readers from this, the dearth of faintest writing and the most incapable of failed adventure experiences. All seven of me await further chapters of further script with breath in short supply.

Eric's on fire in this chapter!

Love the statue and the description of the city - really original.