 deviocity 2009-11-22 . chapter 6awesome story!
i like the idea of Sam having a secret hide-out in the school. i like even more that the first person she invited to see it was Freddie.
i was so glad when Freddie asked Sam out the second time because he wanted to and not because Carly made him. I thank Germy for opening up Freddie's eyes.
I loved Mrs. Benson. I loved her excitement at Freddie having a date. And the love the complete 180 she did when she saw Sam all cleaned up.
Loved how jealous Sam got when Carly suggested switching dates and when Carly went up to her and Freddie in the middle of their dance. And i loved how down Freddie got when he thought Sam was going to ditch him for another guy.
I thought it was so cute that the Shay siblings have that thing where they knock in the adjacent wall.
I admit that I was a bit disappointed that Sam and Freddie didn't officially become more than best friends by the end. But I'll just leave it up to my imagination and think that they do. :)
again, awesome story. and thanks for the great read. |
 BURTHI44 2009-10-30 . chapter 6loving it! |
 BURTHI44 2009-10-29 . chapter 5LOVED IT! |
 Siggy-23 2009-10-06 . chapter 4Ok I love the references you make in this story; fantastic and you are an excellent writer.
I can see that you put a lot of thought getting into the characters heads and keeping them in character.
Fantastic story! |
 SomethingsWicked 2009-10-03 . chapter 6I really loved this. I mean really really really loved this. I've been loking for forever for a good Freddie/Sam fic and this was just perfect. I sincerely hope that you continue to write more about them because you captured their personalities perfectly and made it believable and I haven't found anyone else who can. |
 Mlle. Madeline 2009-09-19 . chapter 2I just wanted to say that when i read the bit where you likened Sam's facial expression to "Goya’s 'Saturn Devouring His Sons,'" I got the most ridiculous mental image of that painting with Sam's hair on Saturn's head and i kinda died a little. Awesome.
And Freddie's ridiculous #2 pencil proposal made me laugh out loud too.
Nice work :D |
 KeyLimePie14 2009-08-10 . chapter 6So cute, so funny, so romantic...
Just so pure seddie.
Haha, I will stop now with the adjectives for fear of sounding even more cheesy than I already do.. (plus, I really do not want to ramble.)
:D
Anyway, I just wanted to state that I thoroughly enjoyed this story.. And for what reasons?
I haven't a clue. (: Just kidding.
It is written in a very good, concise writing style, the plotline is well thought out, and the characterizations are right on spot.
(:
Not to mention I had butterflies so many times. haha.
Great story. ;) |
 Yellow Fluffy Cloud of Doom 2009-08-05 . chapter 6When I first saw this stories description, I thought it would suck, and put off on reading it completely. But having the lack of a good Seddie fic, I decided to take a shot at reading it, and I didn't regret it. This story is rich with seddie goodness, and with a very generous amount of writing per chapter. I give this story a 10/10, an A+, and two thumbs up. So, I hope you picky Seddie shippers out there learned not to judge a fic by its cover.
From Yellow |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 6Woah, this was honestly just perfect! I totally agree with the way you ended it, anything else would've been too fluffy and I hate when stories aren't realistic!
I love your style of writing, it's detailed without being wordy. It's more like reading a novel than a ff, you know? Also the Seddieness was adorkable.
I loved this, a thousand times I loved this. But I'm a little tired (as I'm sure you've noticed with my crappy adjectives) so I'm not quite sure how to properly tell you how ah-mazing this story really was, so I'm just going to leave it at perfection!
Thank you for letting me read this! :D |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 5AW! She slept with the pencil! Who knew a pencil could be so adorable!?!?
The whole dance was cute and so well played! You had just the perfect amount of angst (Sam worrying about why they were there) and fluff (just about everything else) and I giggled when Carly was like "want to switch partners" because it was so sneaky!
You also kept using songs/bands that I've seen in concert so for like every song I'd get a flashback of the concerts and be like, wow good times!
Brilliant chapter! :D |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 4This whole chapter had my little fan-girl heart squealing! From Spencer being a Seddie shipper to Crazy being turned into a Seddie shipper to how Freddie was all in awe about how gorgeous Sam looked but didn't even bat an eye towards Carly.
Utterly loved this chapter! |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 3A schemeing Carly is absolutely hilarious! I'm very happy that she didn't have to do all the work! Even if was Germy that had to help Freddie realize Sam's potential. You know what's funny? I know a Jeremy that we call Germy but he's not a sneezer... he just coughs up blood. And it's really gross. And I'm pretty sure he's done like every drug known/unknown to man. (woah, I'm sorry you're getting a lot of pointless random stories from me tonight...)
Anyways, I loved when Carly's like "...you're just a boy" because I had been ranting about that earlier, LOL.
Fabulous job and I'm e c s t a t i c to read the next chapter! |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 2Poor poor Sam.
I would be so entirely ** if a guy asked me out and then admitted to only doing it because a friend told him to. In fact I think I'd react even more violently than Sam... but I'm a fighter not a lover ;)
And Freddie is such a boy! I mean, gah, such a freaking boy. How come guy's always go after the girl that doesn't want them?! I think men in general actually don't want a girlfriend. They want a prize. And so they go after what seems to be the best prize aka the most sought after one. Because when it comes down to it life is just another sport to them... and wow I'm sorry to be ranting like this I will stop NOW and go on to the next delightful (as your writing always is) chapter! |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 2009-07-07 . chapter 1I would not be upset with myself if you suddenly had a huge ego, because you deserve it, with that kind of brilliance!
Also I've just wanted to say that I think both Carly and Spencer are Seddie fans, there's clues all the time and I always go "Oh Oh!" and then call Sarah and then she rambles how hott she thinks Spencer and Freddie are... I'm sure you didn't want to know all that but I just wanted to give you a round of applause for catching the fact that Carly is a Seddie lover, and on to the next chapter! :D |
 Wow... 2009-05-30 . chapter 6 This is the first completed fanfic i've read that actually stays in character, to an extent(i mean, it's still a fanfic). but not too fluffy, just enough. i see your point in not going too far with the realasionship, good for you in not getting carried away. You just knocked of my old favorite fanfic to second on the list |