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| snowcakes 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent. This was very excellent. I always wanted to read something with Ichigo and Hinamori as a pairing. Brilliant job. :D |
| Shimo Ino 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseIts very pretty but i bet that Ichigo's a little more than confused! Good job, loved reading it! |
| HItsugaya Momo-chan 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIchigo and MOMO?! I'm offended! Dispicable! momo's friend: how could you!?!!?!?!?!?!!?!?! this should be illegal! did you have a brain concusion or something?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?! |
| Lychee Green Tea 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuse...Wow. I'm actually not a huge fan of this pairing. I'd never actually even considered it until a little while ago. While I'm still a bit undecided and somewhat uneasy about the pairing, I found your writing to be very...enthralling. I was tempted to read it, and your writing skills just made it all the better. This is a really good piece of writing. Take care, ~LGT |
| Soul of the Silver Phoenix 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThe scary part of this is that I could totally see it happening. Great work! |
| kenichikyle11 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusei loved it. it was pure. the writing. (hoped that made sense. ) the way you described her...it was perfect. and the ending, it was good. but it leaves me desiring more. but this was enough i guess. excellent story. |
| Abrogate Nadir 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI found myself deeply enthralled by this piece especially (though I love your other work as well). Momo's insanity was so well done...so much more subtle than others might have done it, and...it just felt like you nailed her (in a good way) post Aizen-mindfuck. 4.5/5 |
| A Smile and a Half 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! I really love it. I'm definitely treasuring this forever. You're amazing! I really hope to see more Ichihina stories, don't you? Thank you, Lady Salazar-sama for writing one of the very few. I'm rambling! Bye. |
| Archimorus 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow its great so far, I hope you will update soon |
| Ronin Kenshin 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseit was really good you should keep it going though i hate the idea of ichi serving aizen its still a good one |
| Aberrant Zeitgeist 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseOh my, what an excellent one shot. I love your characterization of Hinamori and the overall execution of the fic. Really, very cool, very well done. |
| somebody 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... I didn't know this pairing could be written without one of them being um...you know... I meant that to be a compliment, and I'm writing this part because it seemed like it could be taken the wrong way... |
| Kandagawa 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Ichigo/Hinamori is probably my favorite pairing, but the reality is that it's simply not an easily written pairing; however, you managed to write it in a way that it didn't matter how plausible it was in canon or not. It was executed perfectly. I loved that Hinamori was losing it but she wasn't like outright crazy; her being written as like super insane only works for pure comedic crack fiction. Her poignant, almost poetic delusions were simply beautiful. Very nice work. |
| Big-Babidi 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseVery good. And very in-character. Nice work. |
| Jadedmagus 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseUtterly awesome. Nice way to make siding with the soul consuming monsters the more appealing of the choices. And Momo ain't crazy, she just sees everything differently than anyone else... ok, she's nuts. |