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| ElizabetRose 2008-09-11 ch 17,  | abuseThis whole story has been an evil cliffhanger. I like the bit about the cleaners and the evil elders and how this Chris is the same Chris we knew from S6 of the series. I'm wondering if in future chapters there will be an explanation of how someone [Leo] who is supposed to be good could take out his disappointment with an adult's actions on a child. I think Leo had to be turned to treat little Chris so cruelly, so how did he get turned and how did he get turned back? |
| AshleyMarieHalliwell 2008-08-23 ch 20, | abuseWow this is really really good. I can't wait for you to update it. |
| chalicity 2008-08-06 ch 20, anon. | abuse... what!? it ends here? no more chapters!? *PERISHES IN DISAPPOINTMENT* D: |
| chalicity 2008-08-06 ch 16, anon. | abuseTHIS IS A BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT MAKES ME SOB LIKE A LITTLE GIRL, DARN YOU. such wonderful family love and brotherly bonding...! *sniffles* |
| kcbelles 2008-04-19 ch 20, | abuseWhat a story-line! I'm lovin' it - you have surpassed all others and are now my favorite author in here. What an imagination you have, and to be able to write so well and so fluidly - very exciting to find. I have to say I was surprised this wasn't complete - I started this one this morning after I discovered I had already read "Be Careful..." Thank you for sharing your talent with us. You could easily go professional, you know. UDS, please - very anxious to see the next chapter. I'm still a little confused about the Evil vs Good universes, but I like how it's playing out. |
| Shivani123 2008-04-06 ch 20, | abusewow u are so amazing with this story. I couldn't stop reading. I hope u update real soon, its gonna drive me nuts to wait |
| ChristineDrewFan 2008-03-31 ch 20, | abuseGot kind of confused, but it made sense when I reread it! Great job though! Please update soon! |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 20, | abuseGreat chapter... Well done... update soon... I like your ideas by the way ;)... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 19, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 18, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 17, | abuseit maid me laugh, maybe not your intension, but I did... So well done on this chapter... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 16, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 15, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 14, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-22 ch 13, | abuseGreat chappie... Well Done... future Wyatt, please save him ;).. |