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| dutchie 2008-09-08 ch 13, anon. | abuseman hope ypou update this fic |
| Samson28 2008-08-31 ch 13,  | abuseEnjoying the story. |
| slowwriter 2008-07-09 ch 13, | abusepleas keep on working . it´s a really briliant story |
| precious pup 2008-07-05 ch 13, anon. | abuseOh interesting McGee a daddy now? Really want to se Ziva and McGee together and having a little chat.More please. This is a great story. |
| Firewolfe 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseLovely chapter love the boy's name and a very nice twist making Tim the god father. Way to go more soon I hope. |
| scottiedog 2008-06-22 ch 12, | abusePlease update again soon! Looking forward to more! |
| Forget Me Not Blue 2008-06-22 ch 12, | abuseThat a was nice chapter. I liked the interaction between Tim and Ducky. |
| precious pup 2008-06-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseOk did I dream a chapter with McGee and the Director? or was this chapter meant to go there and now you have corrected the time line a bit and that chapters next? |
| LittleRedDog 2008-06-21 ch 12, | abuseGlad to see the update. This was a good chapter to catch up on some character backstory. Nice interaction between Ducky and Tim, Ducky is a good character to use when you need to build some narrative into your storyline. Too bad the NCIS gang couldn't be there (I wonder what they got called away for?). The plot thickens. I see you couldn't resist mentioning Richard Dean Anderson's love of hockey ;-) |
| precious pup 2008-06-17 ch 12, anon. | abuseDuh Duh Dah oh interesting. Sounds like Tim has really changed while he was away. Will he ever work with the team again or will he eventually become the new Director and Tony the new Gibbs? |
| Firewolfe 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseNow this works. I hated that NCIS killed Jenny off and in such a stupid way as well. I look forward to seeing the fix. Lisa |
| methoslover 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseI really like how Tim has turned out!! I can only assume it is a Tok'ra or a healing hand device. :-) |
| Reefgirl 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseWow, what a twist, I love this story |
| Usher 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseAnd so the plot thickens... Excellent story so far! Please keep it up! |
| TonyDiNozzoFan101 2008-06-11 ch 11, | abusegreat story i love it |