|Reviews for Chronicle of Darkness|
| Vavita 8/29/09 . chapter 23
Well, it took me 7 days to read up to chapter 23 and I just realized that you said you have 9 arcs in mind and we are right now in the third one! When will this story end? in 2015? Oh, my God! I have to say I don't mind waiting because this story is hyper-cool! You are a great writer and have innovative ideas. I hope you update soon! I hope you are not killing Jack at the end!
| Zailz-101 8/26/09 . chapter 24
Loved the last chapter, can't wait for even more. You never dissappoint.
| Thug-4-Less 8/26/09 . chapter 24
Excellent chapter, LK! There was no action but you're definitely moving the plot forward. Your glossary is going to be massive by the time you finish this story. Lol. Anyway, that's all I have to say at the moment. Other than... you'd better be working on that next chapter! Heh.
Thanks for writing!
| Vavita 8/26/09 . chapter 5
I was actually looking for some romance story between Riddick and Jack but this one is really cool! It's hard to follow the fghts but maybe because English is not my mother language. Anyways, keep writing! Great story. I am reading ch 5 and dont know if there is romance coming up but if not, no problem, the plot is way too cool as it is!
| Cat Yuy 8/25/09 . chapter 23
Yippee for more.
| askita 8/17/09 . chapter 3
Hm... I've told you how I felt about the sparring, and I'm waiting for everything to kick off. I know it'll apparently be a while though. *grumble grumble* I'm also really excited bout what happens with Jack some more. Waiting for Riddick to figure some shit out and get his ass in gear. "Take her away already!" *grins*
| askita 8/16/09 . chapter 2
I would like to take this time to state that I do not like the little girlfriends. Cassandra espically. They drive me batshit crazy and I want them to die. Or... you know, at least disappear. Be left behind. Whatever.
I like her temper, and how she's having trouble controling it. It's very, real. I will admit though, I thought that Riddick's animalistic personality came from him being Furian. Unless this is the foreshadowing you were talking about. I also like the tiny devlments (is that even a word) that we have into the less harsh side of Riddick.
Imam is good in this too, supportive and not overbearing or scared as he seems in the movie. (Although it's been ages since I've seen either one. I must brush up.) A good little look at how they've been living life and moving on since the tradgey is good too. How old is Ziza in this... she seems a little outspoken for 3. And I don't imagine Imam jumping into a marriage and having kids right off the bat.
I actually liked bouncing back and forth between the scenes, and picking up on the sentances rather well. It was a good little bit of dialogue. I also really enjoyed learning more of Jack's previousl life, I can imagine that can't have been easy. Great job.
| askita 8/14/09 . chapter 1
So far, I love it. I know I picked up late, but I'm immensely glad that you're writing lenghty chapters instead of short and sweet. I'm really enjoying this and plan on finishing it as soon as I can find the time. *grins*
| Zailz-101 7/31/09 . chapter 22
Oh wow, this story has kept me interested for a couple days now, keep up the good work and hope the chapters don't take all that long to come out. Haven't been this excited about a fiction in a while. Keep up the good work and good luck with later chapters.
| kate1706 7/27/09 . chapter 23
W.O.W. I'm so happy right now to have found this story. I've been reading it from the beginning for about three days now and it's just so good!
Hope to hear from you soon.
| iRock421 7/21/09 . chapter 23
My, oh my...I just read everything one shot and I must say, its the best I've come across yet! I stayed up till, no joke, 3am finishing it.
The sub-plots are freakin' awesome, and so well executed its beyond words. All the inner conflict and emotion rolling around in this fic is electric!
Here's hoping for a speedy update, you def. have the power of the pen, so they say :-)
| FluidDegree 7/17/09 . chapter 23
I am enjoying the story alot. I love all the conflict that arises. I am glad that Jack is getting the help that she needs and hopefully she will merge all her personas. I am thinking that once that is done then you will work on her and Riddick's relationship and can not wait to see how you have that come about. I hope you get to update soon.
| Half-elf 7/16/09 . chapter 22
Great, absolutely great! This is a wonderful story. I do hope we get to see more of C4sper. I love his interactions with Rachel, they're just so much fun to read.
Can't wait for your next chapter.
| sarah 7/15/09 . chapter 23
dude- this story is awesome! when are you planning to add more? i just read through all of it in the last, oh, 3 days, and i just couldn't stop :)
you got the characters really well and i love all the geek references! your OCs are also fully fleshed out and well-contructed, and you've managed to pull along several threads of parallel- and sub-plots beautifully.
kudos! i look forward to future postings for this. take care!
| bcd 7/13/09 . chapter 23
loving it. keep it up.
small galaxy, eh?