WOW o.0 that was funny remember to put down "sake stash" and "got" in your story. Remember that editors stress great detail and that is to not lose or confuse your readers even great authors emphasize with great detail whatever the story is about whether it takes place in the future or in the past. You didn't make any major mistakes so it is no big deal. But if you are trying to be a author remember this fact and let it sink in. Overall Very Funny GOOD JOB!

that had to be the funniest stories I have ever read. Thank you for making me laugh

hmm... rite

hahahahahahahahahahahaha..did i say hahahahaha?lol! i love it. very funny! byes

*Shakes her head sadly but laughs* This was ridiculous and exactly what I needed at 1:13 AM Thanksgiving morning. Thank you so much... it made me laugh. Poor Kureno... Although, I really appreciate you writing this! -Tifa Tyndal

lol cute