The dialoguing was confusing at times; i couldn't tell who was talking (try to keep it consistent, like going from chuck to sarah to chuck)...other than that the story was great! you should write more like this!

This was a fun little story. Thannks for sharing it with us.

aw, this is so cute! :D

I loved it! Chuck is such an awesome show that it should have its own category! Please keep writing more 'Chuck'!

I'm a little mad that it doesn't have its own category...gr.

Lol, but that was really good! I'd like to see more interaction with present-day life around them and their reactions. But please keep writing.