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sexy Seren
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
update it soon
Rekrah
2008-04-25 . chapter 6
Hi, Love your story!! Are there going to be more chapters?
RedLion2
2008-04-23 . chapter 6
Wow, Midge, I absolutely loved the Ayame arc of this story! She's so tough and brave. I can't imagine being bullied so badly like she was, and putting up with it. Good for Relena for slapping the headmaster at Eve River...what a jerk!
I just ADORED Heero in this part of the story. He's so cute with his girls! And finally the truth comes from his lips, and wallet...he piloted the massive Wing. Can you just imagine finding something like that out about your father?
And I'm glad that Ayame is going to school with Ethan. You know he'll take care of her...by the way, how much older is Ethan than Ayame? He seems older to me.
Awesome so far. But now the big question...what about your other story?!
angel03618
2008-04-18 . chapter 5
i love this chapter, i mean... relena slapped the stuck-up head master... YAY!

thanks for not being offended for my last review. i don't feel guilty anymore.

anyway, update soon. thankyou
Lena
2008-04-17 . chapter 5
THIS IS GETTING SOO GOOD!! GO RELENA!! IM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
angel03618
2008-04-14 . chapter 4
omg, this is such a sad chapter. i really liked it, but at the same time, i would have liked to see Relena and Heero have a scene together, please don't take that offensively, coz i wouldn't change a thing about the way you've written it. anyway, can't wait for the next chapter
Kage of Seireitei
2008-04-13 . chapter 4
Heero to the rescue. I really hope his past is revealed to everyone AND the fact that none of the adults think he is an evil murderer for being a gundam pilot and instead one of the biggest heroes. Yea, like the school should play the footage of the battle at the end of the Endless Waltz AND have Mariemaia come in to explain things. I just want those jerks to eat their words when they realize what a good person Heero is.
angel03618
2008-04-10 . chapter 3
i absolutely love the way you write. it is some of the best writting in the Gundam site, seriously. i can not wait for next chapter.
Kage of Seireitei
2008-04-10 . chapter 3
aww. Heero is just so fatherly its sorta cute seeing him take care of his kids. i wonder what its going to be like when they are all teens. *shudders* I guess thats the benefit of being a former gundam pilot and super soldier. He might be able to handle that.
Draculina17
2008-04-09 . chapter 3
Now I want to go find my copy of that book...19 and I want to read that book again...
RedLion2
2007-12-17 . chapter 2
Wow. That was amazing. Your writing only gets better as you go on, you know that? I can't wait to see what and who you write about next. I like that Relena and Heero understand each other so well, that they don't really need any words. And Heero was never good with those, anyway. Great idea for a fan story.
Kandida
2007-12-11 . chapter 2
Oh you update on here as well. Good!
Kandida
2007-12-11 . chapter 1
I read in blissful once, but I grinned everytime I read!
angel03618
2007-12-04 . chapter 1
very nice, it's so sweet. i really like this, honestly, you should be proud of this story
RedLion2
2007-12-03 . chapter 1
Wow. That was so good. I've always liked stories about the Gundam boys after the wars were all said and done. And you know what? I think giving Heero all girls is a stroke of genius. We all know he has it in him to be tender and gentle, but we so rarely see it in stories. Great job, Midge. You are one of my favorite Gundam writers.

-RedLion2
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