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| -the-coconut-bubble- 2006-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseSure...the ending was kinda weird. But if anyone else tried to write about something like that happening, it would have been corny beyond belief. Good job. |
| RanDOMaZnWRIteR 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseKYA! So KAWAII!! ^-^ |
| Tearful Joy 2004-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh My F*in' God... That was amazing... Ja Ne! -Tearful Joy- |
| LadyDi 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWai! Very good ^_^ |
| Candyland 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseGotta say, it usually takes quite a bit to make my jaw drop. But when you said "she hit the ground," I was like *GASP* and then it was a dream...ayiyiyi...don't scare me like that! |
| Rei Minomiko 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abusejade, that was so sweet! and the ending wasn't bad at all...i really love it! you're writing style is great; you seem to be an expert on inserting humor at the right situation..i've read vacation! and it just so cracked me up! |
| SGTsexy 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuseawwwwwww..*sniff* !! |
| Jill 2002-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Tilts head to the side, considering* Honestly? I think it was better without the addition of this ending. Stopping at turing over the letter was a nice touch of suspense with a small nod to the surreal, being rather 'Lady and the Tiger'-ish. This gives it more of a sense of conclusion... but the inference, the extrapolation of probabilities was much more interesting. |
| Linael 2002-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseoooo! Great fic! |
| CherrySakuraGirl 2002-10-13 ch 1, | abuseYay! You wrote a finished version! After i read the original version w/out the ending, I was really sad because there was no conclusion and i wanted to know what happened! Then i scrolled down your bio page and i found the other part and i was very happy. ^.^ I like it, and i don't think that it's weird at all. Good job! |
| Akane 2002-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSince you asked for it, I'll give you a bomb threat (Since i read the original one and think this ending crap kinda ruins the fun). I've got nothing else to do with this review!!! And if that psycho reviewer of yours reads this, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Oatmeal and ketchup!?!?!?!?!?!?-_- I'm going to hurl!!!!!! |
| Deathstroke50 2002-03-13 ch 1, | abuseNice fic. Though the whole 'nightmare' thin has been done to death, you managed to attach strings to it's orotting corpse and make it dance. I think it would be strange if you changed the ending to where the letter wasn't the one from the council, but one from Syaorian telling her to meet him at tokyo tower or somethig, then he jumps and then she jumps when she finds out he's dead (can't resist killing off characters due to Romeo and Juliet). Good one (it isn't late enough to become wierd :( Deathstroke50 "PH33R TH3 1/1s!" |
| inabsentia 2002-03-10 ch 1, | abusereally great story! now that i think of it, the one i wrote a while ago has a similar plot. but yours is much better! |
| the weird kid 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseUR STOWY IS SO PURDY!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! that's the best description i can think of. meh. wow. ur stories make mine look like the crap that they are. well actually, my stories make THEMSELVES look like the crap that they are. but compared to others, im satisfyed. i cant spell. WHAT DO U EXPECT?!? IM ONLY 12!!! yeah, ill stop my senseless ramblings....nnnow. no. okkkkk......NOW! yeah ill just leave now. |
| The PenMaster 2002-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a bomb threat. No, not really, it's just me being high... I liked this story. I'm really not good at this. Happy 1st of July... Yes, I went all high. Blame it on school. |