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| madamadadanechibisuke 2008-08-17 ch 11, | abuseHAHA TWO-BIT! |
| XReality'sxCruelxThesisX 2008-07-30 ch 15, | abuseOH MY EFFING GOD, THIS IS LIKE THE DARK NIGHT!! Okay, I skipped your story a lot of the times because the summary freaked me out, but I finally got the guts to read it. Anyways, this has a good, original plot made from an overused story. Such good quotes and meaningful sentences, stuff to learn from even the littlest things in here. Almost everything here is meaningful and I love it. Sure, everyone was OOC - but war and loss changes everyone, so it was pretty much a given. And sure, it was short and you could've put more, but it leaves enough for a reader's imagination. Parts of the story were dark and sometimes unbelievable, but it definately happens in reality. And the end, I couldn't of imagined a better ending for this story. It was sorta like the way SE Hinton ended her book. Oh, and I loved the letter Pony wrote to Dally. 10 outta 10, this is a wonderful story. |
| SodapopCurtisfan 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved your story! As soon as I started reading it, I couldn't stop. This story of yours is amazing and by far one of the best I have read on here. Keep up the good work! =] |
| TanGerine SereNade 2008-06-26 ch 15, | abuseI fell in love with the story. It has a lot of meaning in it and it sounds like Ponyboy to me, you didi a great job! SO LOVED IT! |
| xemmiex 2008-06-23 ch 15, | abusewow... that story was really really good! :) |
| halogurl10 2008-06-21 ch 15, | abusei so wasn't ready for the ending of the story. the story was awesome. i love all their reactions. |
| little sis 11 11 2008-06-15 ch 15, | abuseI love it...But I hate Darry. |
| BlazingStar999 2008-06-09 ch 15, | abuseYou can never expect anything like this to come out of something like the Outsiders...something that's so different. Awesome! Out of five stars, I give it eleven! |
| waniphil 2008-05-06 ch 14, | abuseI read this story again. I feel more touched than before. So sad. I really love this kind of story. Please wright another story. I will read every fic you will post. |
| Yuffie's Ninja Insanity 2008-04-11 ch 15, | abuseThis was amazing! One of the best stories Ive ever read! Honest to god! I wish I could just hug you right now for making my night! |
| Azure Teriques 2008-02-10 ch 15, | abuseI love it! I thought for a few chapters that you weren't going to have Soda alive, but you did! |
| ShinigamixGirl 2008-01-17 ch 15, | abuseO_O WOAH! I like...so totally was thinking that Soda had Pony's paper when it went missing. xD I loved your story. It was so good. >o< I cried a bit..but it was still great. :D |
| independenthinker 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abusewow, i just read this entire fic today, and to put it simply, I I I I I I I I I T T T T T T T T T R O X X R OO OO X X RR RR OO OO X X RR RR OO OO X RR RR OO OO X R OO OO X X RR RR OO OO X X RR RR OO OO X X RR RR O X X RR RR O X X (i REALLY hope this turns out right!) |
| stereochick 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abuseWow. Great chapter. Great story. Like always, I completely skipped over the introduction of the chapter and everything, wanting to get right to the meat and missed that this was the last chapter, so it was a bit overwhelming when I realized... Having read all of them, I think this is definitely the best story you've written thus far on the site. It's truly excellent and I appreciated every minute of it. I anxiously look forward to your next story. |
| RatsRule 2007-12-04 ch 15, | abuseLOMG I cant believe he took his letter without telling Pony! I cant wait for more caus this is tottaly awsome |