Well this was fun and I'm finally caught up... I wonder if this thing displays emails... gave you a different one everytime... Well I hope you update soon, it's very original and I love your host of characters... Wolf seems arrogant and yet genius at the same time... Nari seems heartfelt and on her toes... and Nickoli... well I really don't know his yet, but the differences in their personalities is sure to make this an interesting Ride... Interesting on Max's escape to the other people, her being a God... haha... But I guess that's how it would seem... okay I just rambled on for a while, hope you update soon though, I really want to see what happens next... speaking of updating.. yeah... I kinda need to too... oops... well until next chapter.

Flamingflie

So... Going through a storm bloody as heck and dropping into a rolling bit of water isn't my idea of a pik-nic ( I forgot how to spell that.. my god I'm dumb )... but apparently it has a certain appeal to them.

Flamingflie

Sweet, driving a corse needle through a butt load of flesh is totally my idea of fun..

Flamingflie

Sweet... sorry I've been slow at reviewing and all, but lives been slow, so it all goes down like that.

Action chapter though... nice...

Flamingflie

I've enjoyed the last few chapters-u really know how to write cliffhangers! Pan's fate was a bit dramatic, as was the introduction of the new character. I'm waiting to see how it all plays out...Tell us more about Nari and Wolf!

nice fic, keep typing. New York is the place most often visited by the Flock, so they will have the most chance of finding Max there.

the Aviator

ps. i might not have read this fic if Blue Fox hadnt suggested it, but im glad he/she did.

WOW! That's the best non-Max story I've ever read! I love the names - very unique. (Maybe other than Wolf, but you can't be completely perfect). You really have to update ASAP.

I love your story, I really do, but won't get to read it until tommorrow.. sorry, it's one of the best non-max stories I've read so far ( love OC's and Nari Streeters name is very unique)... Hope to read more soon!

Flamingflie

Yay! Thanks for the new chapters. The story just keeps getting better. maybe you could post more, like, tuesday. Or sooner, even. There's not many good stories, but this is one of them. I can't wait till the 4th max ride book comes out, though. I hope people like my stories as much as i like this story. When I'm finally able to post stories on this website, that is. Any way, love your story, please write more! Please? Bye! (sorry, I'm always pretty hyper, and I tend to ramble) bye for real this time.

I like the heavier feel of your story compared to the actual books. Nice chapter.

Hey,

I'm very impressed! Your story and plot are moving along very quickly. I love the way you are developing the characters and keeping things moving. Please update soon, k? :)

Good job. Love the names.

This sounds great so far! Please continue!

please, please,please,please,please,please,please,please,p lease,please,please,please,please,please,please,PL EASE update soon. wish i could write like that. my friends tell me i'm a good writer, but i like your story better than mine. weird. i've got a character who's part golden eagle too. but i don't have any stories posted yet. im may, maybe. have to wait till i'm 13

Nice chapter. Keep Writing.