Loved the chapter! Great job! :]
UPDATE!

please update its good so far

haha tohru gets her ** on! didnt see that coming! lmfao could have had a v8...your huhlarius!awesome story!!=DD

i thought kyo went into the cursed word that shouldnt be named! u know, the thing that akito was gonna put kyo in! the cursed box...hole...jail cell...thing! ja ne!~

He could of had a f*ing V8! LOL! But this is a good story up date ASAP

wow. that's totally different than I thought it would be, but keep writing, I'm interested. I do want to find out what happens!

AW!

Why'd u stop! go for more!

tohru was a litle out of character when she smacked yuki.she would have been more ' it's my fault i must have led yuki on,i'm sorry but i love kyo ,something like that. when you put AN in the story( espically ones that serve no purpose [ V8 comes to mind]) it distracts from the story.AN's should really only be used before you begin the chapter or after the chapters finished.i do like the angst and the way you interpreted kyo . i give it a 5 out of 10. it's promising.