I love your characterization of Marisa. The way she becomes enchanted with gold, influencing even her dæmon... I like it. :)

OMG you absolutely HAVE to update this it's so awesome!

This is such a well written fic - you portray the character so well. I do hope there's an update soon.

i love this story about marisa, so good ^_^ !

Ooh, this seems interesting. :D
It's interesting to see someone write something more in-depth to Marisa Coulter's past. Hope to see an update soon! :)

great story

GAHH KELLY!! that was freaking awesome! Edward is so...thick...LOL. Loved this chapter can't wait fot more!

I love this, like really love this.

You should totally get more reviews.

Update soon~!

:) Great chapter, I really love how you've written Marisa! Great work, please ud asap!!

This is fantastic - I hope you updated soon.

Awesome story!! I really really like it. I think you've written Marisa in character, which is hard to do, so well done. Please ud soon!!

great story abot marisa ^-^

i don't usually leave reviews, but i have to say this is a really interesting story and i'm hoping you'll go with it for a while. it's creative and never boring, which are two big plusses in my book.

Very interesting... it's so intriuging to read how different authors portray Edward and Marisa's first meeting. I hope that you update soon!

ooh i really like this. you are painting marisa and her daemon perfectly!